Question

I made a poem, I think you'll all enjoy!

In ancient Egypt, where the Nile flows deep and wide,
Lived a queen named Nefertari, her beauty did abide,
Her smile was like the sun, bright and full of light,
It lit up the land, banishing all dark of night.

Her lips were red as rubies, her teeth pearly white,
Her eyes shone bright, like stars in endless flight,
Her skin was smooth as silk, her grace so divine,
She glowed with inner light, like a precious vine.

Nefertari's smile could melt the coldest heart,
It brought joy to all who saw it from the start,
For she knew how to use her charm and guile,
To make even the grumpiest soul smile.

So if you ever see her, don't be afraid,
Just let her smile warm your heart and stay,
For in its depths, you'll find a love so true,
That will forever keep your spirit new.

Answer 1

Enjoy :/

Answer 2

That is.. Absolutely beautiful. You always know how to bring out the message. Every time I read your poems, a smile always pops onto my face. Amazing job!

Answer 3

soooo good im amazed

Answer 4

That's my friends

Answer 5

Is my bsf being a W

Answer 6

I love it!

Answer 7

Nice poem

Answer 8

Thank you, all <3

Answer 9

Lily?

Answer 10

:<

Answer 11

:')

Answer 12

I think I enjoyed this

Answer 13

This is absolutely amazing Lily.

Answer 14

chicken

Answer 15

Huh?

Answer 16

It looks sooo amazing keep it up <3

Answer 17

Another banger like usual

Answer 18

amazing! i loved this poem, it made me smile

Answer 19

i love it keep up they work 😁

Answer 20

Thank you so much!!

Answer 21

good job mom

Answer 22

good job, keep up the work

Answer 23

I hate it

Answer 24

AWESOMEEE SAUCEEE <33

Answer 25

Amazinggg

Answer 26

ok

Answer 27

Amazing!