Question

which poem is better?

Love~
Love is fun, love is fierce
Always looking for a heart to Peirce
I pray to God that it’s not mine
Cause I'm constantly looking for something divine
Who will it be, Who will it be?
I pray to God that it’s not me

Love 2.0~
Love is hard, love is bold
Just hope you have someone who won’t fold
Love takes time and dedication
But love does not need medications
True love is held by both
And can show them a path to growth
People do need changes
Because people are in different stages

Answer 1

The second one, it just had more of a rythem to it

Answer 2

thx ^

Answer 3

nice rythem

Answer 4

pretty good :)

Answer 5

i like love 2.0

Answer 6

second one

Answer 7

DAD!!!!!

Answer 8

I'm working on another poem currently, I'm closing this one

Answer 9

you don't love me