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velmalovesshaggy145:

Poem I'm working on to give to my girlfriend Need a title though The touch of your hand sends shivers down my spine, Your gentle embrace is where I long to reside. In my love's arms, I feel safe and free, A place where I can just be me. Our love is more than just physical, It's the emotional connection that's truly magical. The way your smile lights up my day, Your laughter washes all the pain away. Our love is like a blooming flower, Growing stronger with each passing hour. Together we stand, facing every strife, As we navigate through the ups and downs of life. In your eyes, I see a world full of wonder, A place where love and happiness never surrender. With you by my side, I feel complete, For you are the missing piece that makes me replete. My girlfriend, my partner, my soulmate, With you, I know I have found my fate. In your arms, I've found my home, A place where love and happiness roam. Feedback,title or ideas for things to add?

velmalovesshaggy145:

Why are you just hovering?

Sonder:

Because I’m reading lil bro

Sonder:

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velmalovesshaggy145:

Don't do that.

velmalovesshaggy145:

@kagura

velmalovesshaggy145:

@uknownprttyfacekayla

Kagura:

i like it but iont know for a title

velmalovesshaggy145:

@kagura wrote:
i like it but iont know for a title
thanks anyway.

Tsukage:

You've got a gf.?

velmalovesshaggy145:

@tsukage wrote:
You've got a gf.?
yeah, I've said this multiple times.

Tsukage:

G4u

velmalovesshaggy145:

thanks

velmalovesshaggy145:

Any feedback or ideas for a title?

Tsukage:

Hmm

Tsukage:

Thinking, mb

MarioMx64:

yo nice poem

velmalovesshaggy145:

@mariomx64 wrote:
yo nice poem
Thank you!

MarioMx64:

welcome

velmalovesshaggy145:

title?

MarioMx64:

Strong heart

MarioMx64:

Or Strong soul

velmalovesshaggy145:

Not sure about those.

MarioMx64:

hmmmmmm...

MarioMx64:

i think one...

MarioMx64:

i know

MarioMx64:

Moonlight of Love

MarioMx64:

so what do you think?

velmalovesshaggy145:

Nice! It's very catchy, I'll keep it in mind!

MarioMx64:

welcome

Midnight97:

It looks amazing but I have no clue what the tile should be

Luv4von:

coo

velmalovesshaggy145:

"My One and Only", gave it to her already.

NotLeiland:

Title it "I'm coming out as gay because I'm afraid of women"

velmalovesshaggy145:

@notleiland wrote:
Title it "I'm coming out as gay because I'm afraid of women"
I'm not gay, and leave me tf alone. I haven't done anything to you. If you don't have anything nice to say, or are gonna suggest a title get off the post.

NotLeiland:

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:
@notleiland wrote:
Title it "I'm coming out as gay because I'm afraid of women"
I'm not gay, and leave me tf alone. I haven't done anything to you. If you don't have anything nice to say, or are gonna suggest a title get off the post.
I did suggest a title... the fact that it "offended you" or "made you angry" and you chose to disregard it is your own fault

velmalovesshaggy145:

@notleiland wrote:
@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:
@notleiland wrote:
Title it "I'm coming out as gay because I'm afraid of women"
I'm not gay, and leave me tf alone. I haven't done anything to you. If you don't have anything nice to say, or are gonna suggest a title get off the post.
I did suggest a title... the fact that it "offended you" or "made you angry" and you chose to disregard it is your own fault
Why would I name a poem for my girlfriend, something stupid and inappropriate like that. You made that comment to annoy me.

NotLeiland:

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:
@notleiland wrote:
@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:
@notleiland wrote:
Title it "I'm coming out as gay because I'm afraid of women"
I'm not gay, and leave me tf alone. I haven't done anything to you. If you don't have anything nice to say, or are gonna suggest a title get off the post.
I did suggest a title... the fact that it "offended you" or "made you angry" and you chose to disregard it is your own fault
Why would I name a poem for my girlfriend, something stupid and inappropriate like that. You made that comment to annoy me.
Once again, not my problem that you get offended by words (Typical fag trait btw)

velmalovesshaggy145:

@notleiland wrote:
@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:
@notleiland wrote:
@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:
@notleiland wrote:
Title it "I'm coming out as gay because I'm afraid of women"
I'm not gay, and leave me tf alone. I haven't done anything to you. If you don't have anything nice to say, or are gonna suggest a title get off the post.
I did suggest a title... the fact that it "offended you" or "made you angry" and you chose to disregard it is your own fault
Why would I name a poem for my girlfriend, something stupid and inappropriate like that. You made that comment to annoy me.
Once again, not my problem that you get offended by words (Typical fag trait btw)
Inappropriate and not needed hateful words

velmalovesshaggy145:

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:
@notleiland wrote:
@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:
@notleiland wrote:
@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:
@notleiland wrote:
Title it "I'm coming out as gay because I'm afraid of women"
I'm not gay, and leave me tf alone. I haven't done anything to you. If you don't have anything nice to say, or are gonna suggest a title get off the post.
I did suggest a title... the fact that it "offended you" or "made you angry" and you chose to disregard it is your own fault
Why would I name a poem for my girlfriend, something stupid and inappropriate like that. You made that comment to annoy me.
Once again, not my problem that you get offended by words (Typical fag trait btw)
Inappropriate and not needed hateful words
A typical Salsa trait is spreading hate and messing with people for no reason which you are currently doing.

velmalovesshaggy145:

f@g

velmalovesshaggy145:

Get off the post, and leave me tf alone.

PheonixIsMeh:

maybe “you are my home”?? Idk ;-;

PheonixIsMeh:

Oop

Ragtagirly:

ok

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