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Illuminous:

Broken Poem @Midnight97 : In twisted hues of shattered dreams, A tale of brokenness now gleams, Where once there was hope so bright, Now lies only endless night. The pieces of my heart lie still, Like shards of glass upon a hill, Each one a fragment of what's past, A reminder of love that will last. The memories we shared in time, Now tainted by cruel fate's crime, Leave me to wander lost and alone, With nothing but this heavy stone. My soul is crushed beneath the weight, Of all that could have been great, But now reduced to mere decay, And left to mourn each passing day. Yet even here, I find some peace, For in these ashes, I release, All the pain and hurt inside, And let it fade into the tide. So though my heart may be broken, I'll rise like phoenix from theoken, To face another dawn anew, And find the strength to make it through.

HotPockets14:

damn

Illuminous:

Like it?

Illuminous:

@midnight97

Midnight97:

Omg I love it

Illuminous:

Thank you, Just for you!

Midnight97:

@illuminous wrote:
Thank you, Just for you!
Thank you so much and you're welcome

Midnight97:

And it's so true every word

Midnight97:

That's how my ex left me

Illuminous:

I'm so sorry, I wish the best for you <333

Midnight97:

@illuminous wrote:
I'm so sorry, I wish the best for you <333
It's fine it's been about 3 months now

Sandy99:

@midnight97 wrote:
@illuminous wrote:
I'm so sorry, I wish the best for you <333
It's fine it's been about 3 months now
Mid I still want to kick bros a.ss but the past is in the past

Sandy99:

Plus this look really good

Illuminous:

Oh, Thank you! I'd want to kick his butt too :/

Midnight97:

@sandy99 wrote:
@midnight97 wrote:
@illuminous wrote:
I'm so sorry, I wish the best for you <333
It's fine it's been about 3 months now
Mid I still want to kick bros a.ss but the past is in the past
Hehe I know you do Asher

Sandy99:

@illuminous wrote:
Oh, Thank you! I'd want to kick his butt too :/
You're welcome

OLIVER69:

Oh this is a great poem, and I'll have a great poem to for her... It'll be called backstabber, just saying... but great poem btw

Midnight97:

@oliver69 wrote:
Oh this is a great poem, and I'll have a great poem to for her... It'll be called backstabber, just saying... but great poem btw
What did I do!?

Manny300303199:

great poem

nunyaaaaaa:

love it!

Illuminous:

@manny300303199 wrote:
great poem
Thank you ^-^

Illuminous:

@nunyaaaaaa wrote:
love it!
Thank you!!

curriful:

its nice

Treeko:

Soo good!

snowie:

amazing

Evanescent:

Fire!

euphoriiic:

love thatt

notmeta:

nice

snowie:

it's amazing!!!!

Rosee5656:

dam

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