Question

I'm writing a story based on my grandpas' war stories from the soviet afghan war, would someone please read it and send me opinions? here is the link, I'm still working on it: https://www.quotev.com/story/16233132/The-Runner

Answer 1

I read it, and I think it's good! I definitely wasn't expecting the kid bomber though.
The only suggestion I would give you is to capitalize some of the beginning of your sentences.
I wish it was longer though! Do you plan on finishing it soon?

Answer 2

I am still working on it, thank you, I know I haven't paid too much care to capitalization and it's something I've been working on for a few days now, I'm not entirely sure if it'll be finished soon, but when I am finished I will be sure to run through and check my capitalization, thank you ^^ sorry if my English isn't the greatest, I'm not a native English speaker and am using Grammarly to check my grammar and spelling

Answer 3

Your English is actually really good! The story is easy to understand! I liked it! :)

Answer 4

thank you :)

Answer 5

No problem!

Answer 6

I like it, keep up the great work, cant wait to see the finish

Answer 7

thank you

Answer 8

Can you send the first paragraph to me thru dms? I cant view the website you have it on and I would like to read it!

Answer 9

ok, I could send all of it to you

Answer 10

Damn i really love it, hope to read more from u.

Answer 11

thank youu