Question

I wrote a poem completely by myself. It's called, "Distant and Cold."

Answer 1

When the cold and isolation hit,
You start to feel distant as well.
I’m not talking about winter,
I’m talking about cold-hearted people.

They will hurt you,
And then act like they hurt you.
No matter how hard you try to see good
in them, they will hurt you either way.

So, why even try anymore?
The cold and distant people,
will only make you cold-hearted,
If you keep them in your life as well.

Why do good people suffer?
Good deserves to be recognized.
Bad needs to be gone and punished.
I shouldn’t be on my knees now.

If I’m not what you need,
Please let me go.
I don’t want to be dragged down by you.
You want to hold my hand, and then you don’t,
You’re playing games,
and I’m chasing after you.

So please don’t play with me,
And let me go.
Let me be happy.

Answer 2

nice job

Answer 3

good job, keep up the work

Answer 4

noice father👍