https://www.quotev.com/story/16233132/The-Runner
Just published chapter 13 of this story, please tell me your thoughts and feedback, I'd love to know how to improve this story

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snowie · Answer

Noice, keep up the hard work

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

@snowie wrote:

Noice, keep up the hard work

thank you

Midnight97 · Answer

It is really good, keep it up

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

It is really good, keep it up

thank you man

Midnight97 · Answer

@serolitovmaytasho wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

It is really good, keep it up

thank you man

You're welcome lmao

snowie · Answer

You should published it when you are done

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

@snowie wrote:

You should published it when you are done

Thank you, I likely will

snowie · Answer

@serolitovmaytasho wrote:

@snowie wrote:

You should published it when you are done

Thank you, I likely will

let me know how it goes when you publish it

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

@snowie wrote:

@serolitovmaytasho wrote:

@snowie wrote:

You should published it when you are done

Thank you, I likely will

let me know how it goes when you publish it

will do

Stringcheese272 · Answer

i like it great job

Ragtagirly · Answer

ok

Arizona · Answer

wow love it

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

omg i cant believe i forgot to close this, tysm yall for the support, I've been working on the next chapter albeit im having issues since the last verse of what it's based on is an old yakut proverb and im having trouble expanding on that