Question

can this be turned into a small book?

Answer 1

Jan 18, 2024 By June
My day started weird, i tried to wake up but i did not wake up till my cat would not shut up. So I got up and panicked because I did not plan an outfit so I was relieved when I had a good set of clothes. When i got on my bus my bus driver told me i could sit in the back with my friend, i screamed in excitement bc that was very rare for my bus driver to let me sit where i wanted. When I got to school I saw a lil bag full of lemons. I asked if I could have one but my bus driver said no. I was mad. When i got off the bus i want to get breakfast and when i was barely got there the bell rang, so i hurried and got my breakfast and went to my first period, when we were watching the news i was on my chromebook and i was not paying attention and mr.ham kicked my chromebook! I was surprised. When I left my class I met up with a friend and she got a medal and I don't even understand how she did that, but I'm not surprised. When I got to my second period we had to play “musical chairs” which was a freeze dance with chairs. And it was so loud and David was a lil rude to me and pushed me to the ground off my chair twice. I dislike him. After the second period I left the class and saw some other friends and then went to my third period. Third period sucked, it was so boring and I thought I had more of my test to do but it only had two more questions and I was so bored after that. But I got to get my invitations out and I was texting for the rest of the period. When i got to lunch my friend kept on hitting me but it was funny and i got some chili cheese fries but i don't like the chilly so i js had sm frys and that was pretty good, i brought some cheese danish for some friends and i did not know it went moldy and it was so funny to see their reactions, but they will not get sick, at least i hope! After I was done eating, another friend bought me an ice cream bar, that was pretty nice of him. When we were all done we went outside and sat by the tree. When the bell rang we ran to our next class and that was our kinda daily routine. When i got to my math class it was so boring, i had to listen to miss guyer talk and yap for 10 mins straight instead of reading, and I wanted to read my comic! So when she was done we did bellwork and notes. Half way through the note I was playing with my pencils minding my own business and she called on me! I was not ready she asked smth and i guessed, thank god i got it right but she asked how i got it and i js shuged, honestly i couldn't care less about math. After third period i went to 5th. When I got into class I was already excited, 5th period is always the funnest class of the day. And i sat with jasper and then zayla texted me saying that our class was loud, i thought it was funny so i tried to see if she could hear me. But idk if she did. Not much extra exciting happened that period. When class ended i met up with zayla and then went to my next class. When I sat down I tried to do the bellwork but idk what i was doing. After that ms.walden was doing attendance and she uses my nickname, june! And everyone was mocking me for some reason. But it made me feel respected because she used my nickname! And after that we had to just listen to ms.walden talk which was pretty boring. The bell rang and I walked to my bus but my friend stopped me and told me she hurt, idk what i was supposed to do. I got on my bus while I was squishing some chocolate in the wrapper. I melted and summer tried to grab it and ripped off the corner of it and I had to eat it when I got off my bus. When I got off my bus I walked with Dante and apparently he hates mr.ham . I like mr. ham. But when i got home i did my chores and then i was supposed to find 5 items with the non-gmo thing on them, and it was kinda hard but i found all 5 but then i did not remember if ms.walden wanted then i some sort of assignment in the google classroom or get sent to her. So I emailed her asking what I should do, but I never got a reply. So i ate dinner and tried to finish a project i started but that never happened yet. So I went to bed but for the last 3 days I could not sleep so my dad gave me some melatonin. I helped but i was so fcking annoyed at my cat bc she could NOT Cracker. I ended up getting sleep though.

Answer 2

print it and staple it together

Answer 3

i dont have a printer >:(

Answer 4

the story is good

Answer 5

Personally, I think it could use some work.

Just for a small start:
“My day started weird. I tried to wake up but I did not wake up till my cat would not shut up. So I got up and panicked because I did not plan an outfit so I was relieved when I had a good set of clothes.”

Rewritten as:
“My day kicked off unusually as I struggled to wake up, only managing when my persistent cat demanded attention. The scramble to pick an outfit heightened my morning panic, but thankfully, I found a suitable set of clothes.

Add in more details about the scenery; for example:

“When I got to school I saw a lil bag full of lemons. I asked if I could have one but my bus driver said no. I was mad.”

Where exactly was the bag of lemons? In the school cafeteria, or the bus? Why would the bus driver tell you no?

This is just a small start, if you need more assistance, feel free to tag me.

Answer 6

great book

Answer 7

Yes it can !!, its rlly great 2

Answer 8

Sure just print it out and give it a title