https://www.quotev.com/story/16233132/The-Runner I just published the most recent chapter and added the source poems to each chapter, I'm not sure if I can put this under writing anymore but tell me your thoughts please

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xXChudLord420Xx · Answer

very good work

xXChudLord420Xx · Answer

I read it and I liked it

Treeko · Answer

@xxchudlord420xx wrote:

I read it and I liked it

that's a first

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

bahuiba, thank you

danielfootball123 · Answer

@treeko wrote:

@xxchudlord420xx wrote:

I read it and I liked it

that's a first

its sarcasm u know?

xXChudLord420Xx · Answer

I genuinely think there's talent in this

Treeko · Answer

@xxchudlord420xx wrote:

I genuinely think there's talent in this

uhm

snowie · Answer

It's amazing

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

I'll take it, sarcasm or not

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

@snowie wrote:

It's amazing

thank you so much

danielfootball123 · Answer

@serolitovmaytasho wrote:

@snowie wrote:

It's amazing

thank you so much

oh

Treeko · Answer

@danielfootball123 wrote:

@serolitovmaytasho wrote:

@snowie wrote:

It's amazing

thank you so much

oh

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xXChudLord420Xx · Answer

nevermind, admin is gone.
rata$$ dogsh-it

xXChudLord420Xx · Answer

i've seen roadkill prettier than this

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

meh, c'est la vie, no point in doing anything

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

@xxchudlord420xx wrote:

i've seen roadkill prettier than this

so, any recomendations on how to improve it?

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

if you read it that is

Treeko · Answer

@xxchudlord420xx wrote:

i've seen roadkill prettier than this

wow okay then

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

tbh the only reason I took any issue to the replies he had been leaving is because the story is in memory of my dead grandpa

Angrbrdcantbestopped · Answer

dead grampa is crazy

curriful · Answer

@angrbrdcantbestopped wrote:

dead grampa is crazy

yes you are

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

will probably move this over to writing to see if it's alright