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ShadowKid3:

I need a hook for my essay about school uniforms

ShadowKid3:

and why im with them

rthrth:

you have a lot of options, but I would choose to cite stats or tell a short story about how uniforms helped the school.

HotPockets14:

@rthrth wrote:
you have a lot of options, but I would choose to cite stats or tell a short story about how uniforms helped the school.
Yes do this, but dont use the words, I, am, we, you, any of those types of works. And dont forgot to the MLA WORK SITED PAge at the end of your essay, If you dont do that you get told you plagrism the work, even if you wrote it yourself

ShadowKid3:

@hotpockets14 wrote:
@rthrth wrote:
you have a lot of options, but I would choose to cite stats or tell a short story about how uniforms helped the school.
Yes do this, but dont use the words, I, am, we, you, any of those types of works. And dont forgot to the MLA WORK SITED PAge at the end of your essay, If you dont do that you get told you plagrism the work, even if you wrote it yourself
i need an idea on what i can write

HotPockets14:

Start by staying why the school uniforms are important and how they can keep the outsider out of the school.

HotPockets14:

Personally I think we dont need uniforms but I live in a school distrat where we dont have a dress code at high school but there is many good reasons why there good to have

rthrth:

@hotpockets14 wrote:
Start by staying why the school uniforms are important and how they can keep the outsider out of the school.
I had a debate about this, and the two things I came up with was they help increase security, and decrease distractions in school

HotPockets14:

I would say do the pro and cons about it and see what you can get out of it. and then use the pros that you came up with and put it as your essay and just add details and facts about why there good

ShadowKid3:

but what can i write

ShadowKid3:

like all i have right now is reducing stress levels and improving security

HotPockets14:

@shadowkid3 wrote:
like all i have right now is reducing stress levels and improving security
And give me a minute to help you start it, but I have a question how does it reduce stress levels?

ShadowKid3:

@hotpockets14 wrote:
@shadowkid3 wrote:
like all i have right now is reducing stress levels and improving security
And give me a minute to help you start it, but I have a question how does it reduce stress levels?
well they dont have to think about what to wear and if there following the dress code or not

HotPockets14:

@shadowkid3 wrote:
@hotpockets14 wrote:
@shadowkid3 wrote:
like all i have right now is reducing stress levels and improving security
And give me a minute to help you start it, but I have a question how does it reduce stress levels?
well they dont have to think about what to wear and if there following the dress code or not
true

HotPockets14:

This is what I wrote to kind of give you a idea on what to write, you can use this or use some of it, IDK do what every you want with but I hope it kind of helps School uniforms are good to have because they help with security, Remove of peer pressure/ saves time, Sense of pride in school, Can help stop bullying and many more. Uniforms for schools are a big help with security because it helps to know who’s allowed and who’s not allowed in the school building for the staff and students safety. It helps with removing peer pressure and saves time in the morning by trying to figure out what they want to wear. School uniforms can somewhat help with stopping bullying about each other's clothes cause they all would have to wear the same thing. Encouraging schools to have uniforms could help students to have a better understanding and sense of pride in school and also less distractions for other students.

toga:

"Uniformity vs. Individuality: A Critical Analysis of School Uniforms"

Maramaria:

do you guys still wear uniforms?

HotPockets14:

@maramaria wrote:
do you guys still wear uniforms?
hell no, I can go to school with just a bra and pants on and they would be fine with it

Maramaria:

bruh

HotPockets14:

my school dont have a dress code they just say to keep our private parts covered but thats it

Maramaria:

my school has no dress code at all i wear crop tops an jeans everyday frfr or a bodysuit and sum type of jacket

zombieblud:

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Maramaria:

NO

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