Question

If when you wake up in the morning,
and it's hurting so great.
you don't want to get out of bed,
and face a world of hate.

If everything in life goes wrong,
and nothing you do seem's right.
You just try a little harder,
and soon you'll see the light.

For every person who has put you down,
and filled your life with pain.
you must strive to achieve greatness,
and show them you can win.

For every disappointment,
for the times you are let down.
There will be a better moment,
and your life will turn around.

Because everyone feels heartache,
and everyone feel's pain.
but only those who have true courage,
can get back up and try again.

Answer 1

did you write this?

Answer 2

long time ago

Answer 3

i see well it is very well written

Answer 4

thank you,i mostly took it out my jornal,cause thats where i vent,when i need to

Answer 5

well if you need to talk im here fam

Answer 6

alr alr,but im good for the most part

Answer 7

thas good thas good
but fr whats going on in ur mind lit up my dms fam

Answer 8

alr i got you

Answer 9

fo sho

Answer 10

It's good

Answer 11

thank you thank you

Answer 12

its good

Answer 13

love it

Answer 14

wow

Answer 15

This is really good. I also read the other comments. I agree with the whole writing in a journal to vent. That's where I write my best ideas and worst one as well. As for the poem, I couldn't strive how good it is. Although, it can be very hard to move on and even get out of bed. But with this poem, I do think it would make me get out of bed more. So keep up the good work. ^_^

Answer 16

i dont know how to vent. i say what im thinking in my head but when i try to writ it down i forget

Answer 17

ooooooh i relly like this

Answer 18

i think i like two poems now

Answer 19

i need to carry a journal

Answer 20

im not depressed anymore

Answer 21

oof?

Answer 22

So good. Well done. Well u should always have the courage and hope towards light.

Answer 23

This is really good

Answer 24

:)

Answer 25

i love it

Answer 26

This is amazing. And Yeah using a journal really does help.

Answer 27

you did good

Answer 28

mhm perfect

Answer 29

post more

Answer 30

Good job! You should post more

Answer 31

rn

Answer 32

bruhhhhhhhhhh

Answer 33

oh

Answer 34

when u get home?

Answer 35

Close post, this is spam

Answer 36

is not

Answer 37

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Answer 38

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Answer 39

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