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toga:

a song I wrote about my dad

toga:

I woke up this morning, with a tear on my face The thought of you not being here, is a hard pill to take I miss your voice calling out my name, I miss your warm embrace Life without you, it just won't be the same Chorus: Oh, Daddy, I wish you were here To hold my hand and wipe away my tears It's hard to believe you're gone But I know you'll always live on Verse 2: I remember the lessons you taught me, the stories you'd tell You were always there to guide me and help me when I fell Even though you're not here, you're still with me in my heart And I know that we'll never truly be apart Chorus: Oh, Daddy, I wish you were here To hold my hand and wipe away my tears It's hard to believe you're gone But I know you'll always live on Bridge: I'll always cherish the memories we shared And the love that we had, it'll never disappear I know you're watching over me, from up above And I'll keep your spirit alive, with every note of this song Chorus: Oh, Daddy, I wish you were here To hold my hand and wipe away my tears It's hard to believe you're gone But I know you'll always live on Outro: So I'll sing this song, for you my dear father And I'll keep your memory alive, forever and ever.

Midnight97:

I like it, keep up the good work PS it's amazing

toga:

what should i name it

Maramaria:

is it sad or happy? not reading it rn someone broke my brain

toga:

@maramaria wrote:
is it sad or happy? not reading it rn someone broke my brain
sad

Maramaria:

maybe sum ur dad likes

toga:

@maramaria wrote:
maybe sum ur dad likes
are you asking if my dad likes it

toga:

@toga wrote:
@maramaria wrote:
maybe sum ur dad likes
are you asking if my dad likes it
sorry I miss read it

Maramaria:

no name it something your dad likes

Maramaria:

or idk hold on let me read

Maramaria:

2 sentences in my eyes watering

Maramaria:

name it " wish you were here"

toga:

@maramaria wrote:
name it " wish you were here"
that is a good name

Maramaria:

yeah

XxkilleratcodxX:

i rlly like it u did good

MarioMx64:

really nice song

Djdjdndn:

i love it frfr

MarioMx64:

hey toga you have a nice song

toga:

@mariomx64 wrote:
hey toga you have a nice song
thank you

MarioMx64:

welcome

LunaBechtold:

it is a good song but the one thing is My father was a brat But still Amazing song

YOUNGBALLER:

Good job

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