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acehuert:

Pray on my down fall and theres nothing left but my heart beating outta my chest it hurts the way i still remember all the times that i was blind blinded by the truth of representing a friend but you only just for pretend and i was thinking a little bit clearer now im stuck looking in the mirror Anything worse that could been left never get to rest till i know the truth what do u expect me to do im living life while life gets harder and i always gotta restarter never live on never go back thinking bout the past never thinking abt the present never getting the lessons always fixing my past now im tryna do better and i hope this moment lasts Praying on my down fall its just how things go never going crazy or bouncing off the wall be tryna do better now look at me now living on the respectful lookin down at the crowd then finding the truth through the years tryna find myself a better me now im thinking im getting worse realizing im only getting better never been more sane crazy brain that i used to have but never been the same cause im getting better not getting worse People think im going crazy when i know im really not they only praying on my down fall listening to they’re thoughts inside theyre head picturing me a bad guy instead of something good praying on my down fall yea you know i gosta go but having my life changed people still think im the same always let theyre thought get in theyre way im about to tell you who i really am today im not at all what people make me out to be im really a changed man doing better going through the years with me thinking people are right abt who i am but little do they know im a growing young man still doing better Living life the way i want to not the way people choose for me i know life is hard but i know it gets better now im stuck here writing this song slash letter but people still praying on my down fall Pray on my down fall and theres nothing left but my heart beating outta my chest it hurts the way i still remember all the times that i was blind blinded by the truth of representing a friend but you only just for pretend and i was thinking a little bit clearer now im stuck looking in the mirror Anything worse that could been left never get to rest till i know the truth what do u expect me to do im living life while life gets harder and i always gotta restarter never live on never go back thinking bout the past never thinking abt the present never getting the lessons always fixing my past

acehuert:

what do yall think abt this song

Maramaria:

ohh its the whole thing?

snowie:

it's amazing

Maramaria:

@snowie wrote:
it's amazing
yeah

acehuert:

@maramaria wrote:
@snowie wrote:
it's amazing
yeah
thank you it took me a few days to finish those lyrics tbh

Maramaria:

@acehuert wrote:
@maramaria wrote:
@snowie wrote:
it's amazing
yeah
thank you it took me a few days to finish those lyrics tbh
DAYUM

acehuert:

@maramaria wrote:
@acehuert wrote:
@maramaria wrote:
@snowie wrote:
it's amazing
yeah
thank you it took me a few days to finish those lyrics tbh
DAYUM
making songs takes patience

Maramaria:

the patience i dont have

acehuert:

its better not to rush a process or it wont be as good of a song

snowie:

@acehuert wrote:
its better not to rush a process or it wont be as good of a song
fr

Maramaria:

when i was younger i wrote a diss abt my lil cousins it was bad

acehuert:

i make diss tracks sometimes

Maramaria:

but mine was BAD

jayfafr:

get in the studio

acehuert:

i made a diss track on a guy named jared i still have it in my saved papers

Maramaria:

post it

acehuert:

u sure

Maramaria:

damn

acehuert:

i was really mad at him that day

Maramaria:

an what he do?

cgunter55:

@acehuert wrote:
Title: "Diss Demolition: Fucc You, Jared" Damn Verse 1: Fucc you, Jared, this my diss track, no lies, Calling you out, nothin' but a Apple in disguise. You think you big, talkin' smack behind my back, Well, it's time to demolish you and your wack knack. Chorus: Fucc you, this is my diss track, no fakin', Gonna bring the fire, watch your whole world breakin'. You thought you could play, tryna mess with the wrong, Now it's war, Jared, you'll wish you were gone. Verse 2: Jared, you a clown, actin' all high and mighty, But I see through your fake smiles, actin' so sightly. Your words mean nothin', just vapor in the breeze, I'ma break your ego, bring you down to your knees. Chorus: Fucc you, this is my diss track, no fakin', Gonna bring the fire, watch your whole world breakin'. You thought you could play, tryna mess with the wrong, Now it's war, Jared, you'll wish you were gone. Verse 3: You claim to be the man, but I see only weakness, Hidin' behind lies, callin' it meekness. I'ma expose your true colors, picture clear, Jared's just a scared little boy, full of fear. Chorus: Fucc you, this is my diss track, no fakin', Gonna bring the fire, watch your whole world breakin'. You thought you could play, tryna mess with the wrong, Now it's war, Jared, you'll wish you were gone. Verse 4: I spit fire in every line, burn your ego to ash, Don't come at me like you're some upper-class trash. Jared, you ain't nothin', just a puppet on a string, This diss track's gonna cut, make your ears ring. Chorus: Fucc you, this is my diss track, no fakin', Gonna bring the fire, watch your whole world breakin'. You thought you could play, tryna mess with the wrong, Now it's war, Jared, you'll wish you were gone. Outro: This ain't a game, Jared, it's time to face the facts, You messed with the wrong one, I won't relax. So remember my name, 'cause I won't hold back, Fucc you, Jared, this is my diss track.

Maramaria:

why u repost?

acehuert:

i didnt?

Maramaria:

um

umm:

When it comes to writing, please refrain from bypassing the language filter we have.

acehuert:

@umm wrote:
When it comes to writing, please refrain from bypassing the language filter we have.
ok ill refrain from that language

Maramaria:

@acehuert wrote:
@umm wrote:
When it comes to writing, please refrain from bypassing the language filter we have.
ok ill refrain from that language
lololo

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