I just wrote these lyrics for a jazz project where we had to write our own blues lyrics. How do they sound?

We gave her our all and we loved her every day

We gave her our all and we loved her every day

She had us always and everyday, nobody in the way

She thanked us everyday, so much love we gave her

She thanked us everyday, so much love we gave her

Her other family was not there for her, not like we were

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I just wrote these lyrics for a jazz project where we had to write our own blues lyrics. How do they sound?

We gave her our all and we loved her every day

She had us always and everyday, nobody in the way

She thanked us everyday, so much love we gave her

Her other family was not there for her, not like we were

luhivqqcherry · Answer

awww this is so kyutee >_< !! . hopefully you get a A+ .

ilovemypomchi17 · Answer

yes its about my great-aunt who passed away a couple yrs ago actually. We took care of her for a year before she passed, but one day some family members took her for "a girl's day," and never brought her back. When they had her, she fell and broke her foot, and then they put her into a home where she got covid and passed.

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

yes its about my great-aunt who passed away a couple yrs ago actually. We took care of her for a year before she passed, but one day some family members took her for "a girl's day," and never brought her back. When they had her, she fell and broke her foot, and then they put her into a home where she got covid and passed.

awww omgg I'm so sorry for your loss !! .

ilovemypomchi17 · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

yes its about my great-aunt who passed away a couple yrs ago actually. We took care of her for a year before she passed, but one day some family members took her for "a girl's day," and never brought her back. When they had her, she fell and broke her foot, and then they put her into a home where she got covid and passed.

awww omgg I'm so sorry for your loss !! .

Its okay, thank you. Just a really long and sad story, but things happen. She will be 99 this may.

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

yes its about my great-aunt who passed away a couple yrs ago actually. We took care of her for a year before she passed, but one day some family members took her for "a girl's day," and never brought her back. When they had her, she fell and broke her foot, and then they put her into a home where she got covid and passed.

awww omgg I'm so sorry for your loss !! .

Its okay, thank you. Just a really long and sad story, but things happen. She will be 99 this may.

awww omgg yourr welcomee !! .

ilovemypomchi17 · Answer

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

yes its about my great-aunt who passed away a couple yrs ago actually. We took care of her for a year before she passed, but one day some family members took her for "a girl's day," and never brought her back. When they had her, she fell and broke her foot, and then they put her into a home where she got covid and passed.

awww omgg I'm so sorry for your loss !! .

Its okay, thank you. Just a really long and sad story, but things happen. She will be 99 this may.

She will actually be 100 this may mb.

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

yes its about my great-aunt who passed away a couple yrs ago actually. We took care of her for a year before she passed, but one day some family members took her for "a girl's day," and never brought her back. When they had her, she fell and broke her foot, and then they put her into a home where she got covid and passed.

awww omgg I'm so sorry for your loss !! .

Its okay, thank you. Just a really long and sad story, but things happen. She will be 99 this may.

She will actually be 100 this may mb.

OH MYYY AWWWWW .

ilovemypomchi17 · Answer

yea we always told her when she turned 100, we were going to have a big party for her. well yea, that didn't happen. But she probably would still be alive if none of that happened. she was a strong woman.

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

yea we always told her when she turned 100, we were going to have a big party for her. well yea, that didn't happen. But she probably would still be alive if none of that happened. she was a strong woman.

awww I'm so sorry, my great-grandma would've been 99 this year and we told her the same thing .

ilovemypomchi17 · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

yea we always told her when she turned 100, we were going to have a big party for her. well yea, that didn't happen. But she probably would still be alive if none of that happened. she was a strong woman.

awww I'm so sorry, my great-grandma would've been 99 this year and we told her the same thing .

yea, sorry for your loss as well.

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

yea we always told her when she turned 100, we were going to have a big party for her. well yea, that didn't happen. But she probably would still be alive if none of that happened. she was a strong woman.

awww I'm so sorry, my great-grandma would've been 99 this year and we told her the same thing .

yea, sorry for your loss as well.

aww tysmm 💓 .

ilovemypomchi17 · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

you're welcome

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

yea we always told her when she turned 100, we were going to have a big party for her. well yea, that didn't happen. But she probably would still be alive if none of that happened. she was a strong woman.

awww I'm so sorry, my great-grandma would've been 99 this year and we told her the same thing .

yea, sorry for your loss as well.

aww tysmm 💓 .

snowie · Answer

it's good