I made two poems and wanted to share them!

Hidden
Her blue eyes dark, a tempest's embrace,
Holding secrets, whispers of grace.
In depths unknown, storms reside,
A beauty fierce, where shadows hide.
Through the hardships faces, her spirit soars,
A resilient soul, forevermore.

You & Me
In love's embrace, hearts intertwine,
A feeling do pure, so divine.
Through the highs and lows, we'll always be,
Bound by love, forever free.

Loves gentle touch, a soothing balm,
Fills our hearts with endless calm.
With every beat our love will grow,
A bond unbreakable, forever aglow.

(Feel free to post your poems if you want to!)

Question

I made two poems and wanted to share them!

Hidden
Her blue eyes dark, a tempest's embrace,
Holding secrets, whispers of grace.
In depths unknown, storms reside,
A beauty fierce, where shadows hide.
Through the hardships faces, her spirit soars,
A resilient soul, forevermore.

You & Me
In love's embrace, hearts intertwine,
A feeling do pure, so divine.
Through the highs and lows, we'll always be, 
Bound by love, forever free.

Loves gentle touch, a soothing balm, 
Fills our hearts with endless calm.
With every beat our love will grow,
A bond unbreakable, forever aglow.

(Feel free to post your poems if you want to!)

jayfafr · Answer

AMAZING

AspenIsBest · Answer

@jayfafr wrote:

AMAZING

Like, acually good? to enter a contest with?

jayfafr · Answer

@aspenisbest wrote:

@jayfafr wrote:

AMAZING

Like, acually good? to enter a contest with?

uhm no could use some work but it looks good for a rough draft (:

AspenIsBest · Answer

@jayfafr wrote:

@aspenisbest wrote:

@jayfafr wrote:

AMAZING

Like, acually good? to enter a contest with?

uhm no could use some work but it looks good for a rough draft (:

okiiii

ENI · Answer

How sad is to think that he/she  cares and he only plays with you but u know what vete pa'l diablo

AspenIsBest · Answer

@eni wrote:

How sad is to think that he/she cares and he only plays with you but u know what vete pa'l diablo

for real-

Aubree · Answer

No words it's that good

snowie · Answer

OMG they are so good

Ragtagirly · Answer

I love your Poems!!

mxddi3 · Answer

There could be a few edits made, just make sure the words are correct and make sense. I think they tell a beautiful story though. If you're looking to enter a contest, I'd say write a few more, if possible, and then choose from there. I 
I'd love to read any others that you have. Love love love these.

AspenIsBest · Answer

@mxddi3 wrote:

There could be a few edits made, just make sure the words are correct and make sense. I think they tell a beautiful story though. If you're looking to enter a contest, I'd say write a few more, if possible, and then choose from there. I I'd love to read any others that you have. Love love love these.

Thank you!!!!

luhivqqcherry · Answer

this is sososooso good < 3 .

TheyLuhhJae · Answer

this  is amazing !!

Maramaria · Answer

ok