Question

Guys! Wanna read a story I'm making? :p
Pls don't get mad at some of the stuff at the bottom. I'm not finished yet-

Answer 1

“This is going to be so much fun!!” Abbigail squealed as she, Daniel, Rachel, Lawrence, Elizabeth, and Ally went inside the building to look around.
“Hey Josh!” Dante called, “You got everything out of the trunk?” He snickered knowing the answer
“No I haven’t! And you could help you know!” Josh wasn’t pleased or laughing at this. “Instead of standing there and looking like a mindless git!”
At this Dante burst into laughter; “I’m good Josh, thanks for the offer, but I’mma go inside and look around a bit and try to…” His voice trailed off as he went inside, still slightly chuckling.
Josh sighs and gets the rest of the stuff from the car and brings it inside. He looks around a bit before calling everyone to the dimly lit dining hall to make some rules while they're here. When they are finished making the rules, they play games. There’s an assortment of games they play; like Checkers, Jenga, and spin the bottle (Dante’s favorite because he got to smooch Abbigail 4 times :p).
There was laughter and giggles and of course rough housing everywhere you looked. No one knew that….
Dante and his twin brother Lawrence were cooking everyone dinner and dessert for everyone. They made glazed chicken with mashed and scalloped potatoes and some vegetables. For dessert it was vanilla ice cream and sponge cake.
After eating everyone decided to play hide and seek, Josh was seeker. He waited for everyone to hide and go their separate ways before trying to find them He found Lawrence after only a little bit of searching. Josh told Lawrence to head back to the dinning hall and then they parted ways.
After about thirty minutes after finding Lawrence; Josh hears a shrill scream of “No! Stop it! Plea-”. Then it stopped. Josh stood there for a minute, before he turned around and ran towards the scream. As Josh ran, he tripped over several things, fell a couple times and when he got to the scene he tried to open the door. Won’t budge… He thought and tried several other methods before the door finally opened and what lay there horrified him..
There lay a small, pale body, in a puddle of blood, blonde hair soaked and multiple stab wounds to the stomach and chest.

Answer 2

damn,its good

Answer 3

Thank you c:

Answer 4

oooo the story is very good! I like it. I would continue to read more for sure!

Answer 5

Yay!

Answer 6

your story is amazing literally < 3 , your a very talented writer and I can't wait to read more 🤍 !! .

Answer 7

Thank you sm!

Answer 8

nice

Answer 9

Ty

Answer 10

mhm