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Guys, I added more. Wanna see?

Answer 1

“This is going to be so much fun!!” Abbigail squealed as she, Daniel, Rachel, Lawrence, Elizabeth, and Ally went inside the building to look around.
“Hey Josh!” Dante called, “You got everything out of the trunk?” He snickered knowing the answer
“No I haven’t! And you could help you know!” Josh wasn’t pleased or laughing at this. “Instead of standing there and looking like a mindless git!”
At this Dante burst into laughter; “I’m good Josh, thanks for the offer, but I’mma go inside and look around a bit and try to…” His voice trailed off as he went inside, still slightly chuckling.
Josh sighs and gets the rest of the stuff from the car and brings it inside. He looks around a bit before calling everyone to the dimly lit dining hall to make some rules while they're here. When they are finished making the rules, they play games. There’s an assortment of games they play; like Checkers, Jenga, and spin the bottle (Dante’s favorite because he got to smooch Abbigail 4 times :p).
There was laughter and giggles and of course rough housing everywhere you looked. No one knew that….
Dante and his twin brother Lawrence were cooking everyone dinner and dessert for everyone. They made glazed chicken with mashed and scalloped potatoes and some vegetables. For dessert it was vanilla ice cream and sponge cake.
After eating everyone decided to play hide and seek, Josh was seeker. He waited for everyone to hide and go their separate ways before trying to find them He found Lawrence after only a little bit of searching. Josh told Lawrence to head back to the dinning hall and then they parted ways.
After about thirty minutes after finding Lawrence; Josh hears a shrill scream of “No! Stop it! Stop it! Plea-!”. Then it stopped. Josh stood there for a minute, before he turned around and ran towards the scream. As Josh ran, he tripped over several things, fell a couple times and when he got to the scene he tried to open the door. Won’t budge… He thought and tried several other methods before the door finally opened and what layed there horrified him..
There lay a small, pale body, in a puddle of blood, blonde hair soaked and multiple stab wounds to the stomach and chest. Josh fell to his knees and and let out a stifled scream of pure shock and horror. He couldn’t breath or speak at this very moment.
When the others heard his scream they came rushing over. They all stopped and looked horrified….but Dante was worse. His eyes were wide and he was almost as pale as the body that lay on the floor..drenched in blood. Dante falls to his knees besides Abbigails limp dead cold body and tries to act like it’s a joke, a really messed up joke.
“C…Come one Abbi...t...this isn’t funny..!” Dante said with a half sob and laugh. Dante tries shaking the body, trying to find any sign that this is all a prank…or a joke. But after a while he just gives up and looks at the ceiling, tears streaming down his face. He makes no noise whatsoever.
Ally kneels beside Dante and rubs his back in a comforting manner. “Hey..it’ll all be okay…we’ll find who did this, don’t worry Dante..” Ally whispered with a soft hushed almost motherly tone.

Answer 2

Thats really good

Answer 3

Thanks c:

Answer 4

very good. you are good at writting

i feel like this would be a very good book

Answer 5

Thank you. Much appreciated c:

Answer 6

as like the first part this is amazing your very talented , and this gave me chills 😭 , you should definitely write/make a movie 🤍 !! .

Answer 7

Awe thank you! I'd have to publish this first and I'm not done yet. But I don't think it's movie material. Thank you though!

Answer 8

i love it 100/10

Answer 9

np

Answer 10

it's soo good, amazing work

Answer 11

i keep reading it over and over again i love it

Answer 12

9000000000000000000000/10