Question

How is my poem for English?
How is my poem?
I move like the clouds
in the ocean a breeze
I feel a sense of sorrow
as I rest in the trees
The voices tell me to sore
high within in the sky
For a chicken can never be a bird
and will always fail to rise
the beautiful grass
and humming in the sky
I am drowning in this ocean
Your currents will always rise
I know it is my time
for I have seen this joyous ride
I don't know if should stay
or become a phoenix and fly
Sometimes I am loved
others resent and hate
I will always remain forgotten
that's what they all say
I have been in the dark
and stranded with the tides
I have accepted this solitude
which I so use to despise
I don't know what we are
you stay then you go
for I must take a trip
to somewhere I don't know
I know what you do our guts can never lie
I've seen this all before
I fixed your wings and now you fly
so i been forgotten
here beneath the shore
alone on this island
I hear no sounds anymore
I see your leaving
my tides are calm each day
I don't know why I'm content
I feel no anger or dismay <3

Answer 1

It's very good

Answer 2

^^^^