Question

Should i turn this into a song-

I wanna feel love
I wanna feel piece
nothing ever right
can i be loved
i wanna feel loved
I want to feel peace
i wanna be free
i wanna be freeee
dont let goo
i need you right now
keep your head held high
i feel broken broken broken
so keep your head held high
keep your heart open open open.

Answer 1

I think ima start making random songs now idk tho
Obv this isnt done but this something

Answer 2

I think you should, why not

Answer 3

i love it!!! you def should, also instead of 3 "broken" try 2 then down I think it would sound smoother

Answer 4

I think you should it would be something good people might wanna lisen to or something.

Answer 5

I thought "wanna feel piece" might be an error, but then later on there is "wanna feel peace", so now I'm just confused.

Answer 6

Nice

Answer 7

nice

Answer 8

yes

Answer 9

I think it would be great as a song!

Answer 10

I would be a very good song so make it a song it is very good so do it (: