I made another poem!!!!!

Survivor

Hey grey eyes black, the tempest taken over.
A storm with, her heart aching and torn.
Through shadows deep, her spirit seeks cover,
In darkeness she dwells, her hope forlorn.

But in her depths, a flicker of light,
A glimmer of strength, a will to survive.
She rises above, ready to fight,
With courage and grace, she will thrive.

Question

I made another poem!!!!!

Survivor

Hey grey eyes black, the tempest taken over.
A storm with, her heart aching and torn.
Through shadows deep, her spirit seeks cover, 
In darkeness she dwells, her hope forlorn.

But in her depths, a flicker of light,
A glimmer of strength, a will to survive.
She rises above, ready to fight,
With courage and grace, she will thrive.

Ylynnaa · Answer

i love it

AspenIsBest · Answer

@ylynnaa wrote:

i love it

Thank you!!!!

Bluewolf2004 · Answer

looks good aspen dental lol

AspenIsBest · Answer

@bluewolf2004 wrote:

looks good aspen dental lol

Im not a dental place ;( but thanks

Midnight97 · Answer

It is very good so keep it up (:

Phantomdex · Answer

I really like it! You should keep up the good work!! ^^

euphoriiic · Answer

ooh that's nicee, good jobb<3

AspenIsBest · Answer

Thank you Thank you!

Midnight97 · Answer

@aspenisbest wrote:

Thank you Thank you!

Welcome (:

Scorpion13 · Answer

Beautifully written great use of imagery too