poem i wrote: Why do i even try
Why do i care
Why am i here

The butterflies die one by one
They even lasted longer then friends
But why should i even care
They were there now their not its all gray now

Why am i fighting for something that is gone
Who am i fighting

Its myself
But i lost
So why even cry
I dont even mind

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poem i wrote: Why do i even try
Why do i care
Why am i here

The butterflies die one by one
They even lasted longer then friends
But why should i even care
They were there now their not its all gray now

Why am i fighting for something that is gone
Who am i fighting

Its myself 
But i lost 
So why even cry
I dont even mind

RhianaB112 · Answer

i love it it reminds of my friend in heaven

Anvil · Answer

woah it gives depressing vibes

lilyisreal · Answer

@anvil wrote:

woah it gives depressing vibes

oh sorry lol

Anvil · Answer

@lilyisreal wrote:

@anvil wrote:

woah it gives depressing vibes

oh sorry lol

But it is a very good poem tho dude like i can relate 2 it

whothatemogirl · Answer

love thiss ! really makes u think about things

Arizona · Answer

nice

Midnight97 · Answer

It is good like really good and sad, keep up the good work

skyler420 · Answer

it looks really good

TyTheTwin · Answer

love it

OLIVER69 · Answer

Really good poem. I very much relate and like it. I don't knoww if this this is your first or what, but I definitly see talent, so keep up the work.

snowie · Answer

amazing work