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lilyisreal:

poem i wrote: Why do i even try Why do i care Why am i here The butterflies die one by one They even lasted longer then friends But why should i even care They were there now their not its all gray now Why am i fighting for something that is gone Who am i fighting Its myself But i lost So why even cry I dont even mind

RhianaB112:

i love it it reminds of my friend in heaven

Anvil:

woah it gives depressing vibes

lilyisreal:

@anvil wrote:
woah it gives depressing vibes
oh sorry lol

Anvil:

@lilyisreal wrote:
@anvil wrote:
woah it gives depressing vibes
oh sorry lol
But it is a very good poem tho dude like i can relate 2 it

whothatemogirl:

love thiss ! really makes u think about things

Arizona:

nice

Midnight97:

It is good like really good and sad, keep up the good work

skyler420:

it looks really good

TyTheTwin:

love it

OLIVER69:

Really good poem. I very much relate and like it. I don't knoww if this this is your first or what, but I definitly see talent, so keep up the work.

snowie:

amazing work

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