I made some updates on the song/poem I made for my real dad

We always fight
We always buttheads
Why can't we just get along
It's never right because you are breaking our family
Everyday I wake up you are mad at me
Every time I try to help you, you yell at me
So tell me why you are like this
It is sad, it hurts more than me
This family is broken
Just sitting there crying
Hurting
Breaking

You make me feel like I let you down
Everyday I try to make you proud but I guess I am a let down
You are making me want to die
So I am sitting on the floor thinking about what I have done
Do I deserve this
Do I need this
No
One day you'll see this isn't right
One day you'll be alone but you are my father and I will care for you
I am at my breaking point
You know I will fight for you
Kill for you
You know I love you
But you are a narcissist
You hurt people
You make me and my mom life worst
But you are my father and I will always love you but I don't have to talk to you

Question

I made some updates on the song/poem I made for my real dad

We always fight
We always buttheads 
Why can't we just get along 
It's never right because you are breaking our family 
Everyday I wake up you are mad at me 
Every time I try to help you, you yell at me
So tell me why you are like this  
It is sad, it hurts more than me 
This family is broken 
Just sitting there crying
Hurting 
Breaking

You make me feel like I let you down 
Everyday I try to make you proud but I guess I am a let down
You are making me want to die 
So I am sitting on the floor thinking about what I have done 
Do I deserve this 
Do I need this
No
One day you'll see this isn't right
One day you'll be alone but you are my father and I will care for you
I am at my breaking point 
You know I will fight for you
Kill for you
You know I love you 
But you are a narcissist
You hurt people 
You make me and my mom life worst 
But you are my father and I will always love you but I don't have to talk to you

Midnight97 · Answer

@snowie  @bravosix @oliver69

bravosix · Answer

wow that is heavy but it is amazing sweetie

snowie · Answer

it's amazing sis

OLIVER69 · Answer

Aww, that's really good sweetie. You always impress me with your poems/songs. If this was a song, I would love to hear you sing it or have someone else sing it. It would be a good song. Good job sweetie.

Midnight97 · Answer

@bravosix wrote:

wow that is heavy but it is amazing sweetie

Thank you and I know

KarmaXD · Answer

aww i love it its so sweet keep up the great work!

Midnight97 · Answer

@snowie wrote:

it's amazing sis

Thanks brother!

Midnight97 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

Aww, that's really good sweetie. You always impress me with your poems/songs. If this was a song, I would love to hear you sing it or have someone else sing it. It would be a good song. Good job sweetie.

Aww thanks dad

Midnight97 · Answer

@karmaxd wrote:

aww i love it its so sweet keep up the great work!

Thanks

Sandy99 · Answer

Wow mid this is deep and sad, it makes me think of my mother, keep up the great writing

Midnight97 · Answer

@sandy99 wrote:

Wow mid this is deep and sad, it makes me think of my mother, keep up the great writing

I know this reminds me of your mother too also thanks Asher

Sowny17 · Answer

Yeesh, this is heavy, but I know how it feels,  amazing poem mid

Midnight97 · Answer

@sowny17 wrote:

Yeesh, this is heavy, but I know how it feels, amazing poem mid

Thanks Nate

ITZEMILIE · Answer

Thats rlly great and its rlly deep and u can tell u put work in it

Midnight97 · Answer

@itzemilie wrote:

Thats rlly great and its rlly deep and u can tell u put work in it

Thank you

KatelynGrace · Answer

nice I feel u sometimes when I get some stuff from my parent

Midnight97 · Answer

@katelyngrace wrote:

nice I feel u sometimes when I get some stuff from my parent

The sad thing is that my online dads are better than the real one

KatelynGrace · Answer

I don't know my real dad he left before I was born and my mom gave me away when I was 4 first thing I started to remember and I still love them with all my heart

Midnight97 · Answer

@katelyngrace wrote:

I don't know my real dad he left before I was born and my mom gave me away when I was 4 first thing I started to remember and I still love them with all my heart

I will always love my dad, but I don't have to talk to him and sorry that happened to you hun

KatelynGrace · Answer

"It's okay, I'm accustomed to this."

SwaggyMark · Answer

dang this really hit