my poem

Love is when you love their flaws
Love is when you stick through the Ice Cream even when it's hard
Love is when you need, not just want em cause of what they got
When you tell em you love em just to make sure they ain't forgot

I think love is when she's pretty how she is
When she ain't wearing make up and her hair ain't even did
But you still thinkin' that she just perfect the way she is

When y'all fightin' over somethin', next thing, you laugh about it

love what does it even mean does Is it when you ain't yourself when you ain't next to me?
Is it when you can be yourself and tell me everything?
idk?

Question

my poem

Love is when you love their flaws 
Love is when you stick through the Ice Cream even when it's hard
Love is when you need, not just want em cause of what they got
When you tell em you love em just to make sure they ain't forgot

I think love is when she's pretty how she is
When she ain't wearing make up and her hair ain't even did
But you still thinkin' that she just perfect the way she is

When y'all fightin' over somethin', next thing, you laugh about it

love what does it even mean does Is it when you ain't yourself when you ain't next to me? 
Is it when you can be yourself and tell me everything? 
idk?

Midnight97 · Answer

It is very good Jay, keep it up (:

hilolbtc · Answer

Its really good mabye you should keep doing this

jayfafr · Answer

@hilolbtc wrote:

Its really good mabye you should keep doing this

thanks

jayfafr · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

It is very good Jay, keep it up (:

thanks

hjhjnkj · Answer

nice poem

jayfafr · Answer

@hjhjnkj wrote:

nice poem

thanks

hjhjnkj · Answer

@jayfafr wrote:

@hjhjnkj wrote:

nice poem

thanks

u welcome

Midnight97 · Answer

@jayfafr wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

It is very good Jay, keep it up (:

thanks

Welcome (:

xanonangiex · Answer

noice

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

its really good

Twinzz · Answer

omg this is really good

ilovemypomchi17 · Answer

amazing and so real. good job

jayfafr · Answer

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

amazing and so real. good job

thanku

jayfafr · Answer

@twinzz wrote:

omg this is really good

thank u

jayfafr · Answer

@ihatelifefs420 wrote:

its really good

thank u

jayfafr · Answer

@xanonangiex wrote:

noice

thank u

Twinzz · Answer

@jayfafr wrote:

@ihatelifefs420 wrote:

its really good

thank u

ur welcome

Mayaisthebaddest · Answer

< 3

snowie · Answer

It's very good jay keep up the good work

jayfafr · Answer

@snowie wrote:

It's very good jay keep up the good work

thanks (:

snowie · Answer

@jayfafr wrote:

@snowie wrote:

It's very good jay keep up the good work

thanks (:

np

MAGABACK · Answer

That is awesome. :) gj

ilovemypomchi17 · Answer

@jayfafr wrote:

@ilovemypomchi17 wrote:

amazing and so real. good job

thanku

ofc :)

OLIVER69 · Answer

Wow, bro that really is good. You know it kind of got me thinking. I certainly always think of love like that. Because you're right, it's not what you want, it's what you need. It's not how someone looks on the inside, it's how they appear and look on the inside. I really love this poem. This is one of my favorites now. Keep up the good work, and please tag me in more poems you make. Have a nice day.

Rosee5656 · Answer

love love LOVE it

sxlvergxge · Answer

I think the way you talk about 'her' it's so sweet and the way you complement how she looks. Not many people write poems so honestly about how they feel about a romantic partner and the way you portray your compassion for her just makes me smile! :)
I'm looking forward to any more poems you write! >:D

jayfafr · Answer

@sxlvergxge wrote:

I think the way you talk about 'her' it's so sweet and the way you complement how she looks. Not many people write poems so honestly about how they feel about a romantic partner and the way you portray your compassion for her just makes me smile! :) I'm looking forward to any more poems you write! >:D

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