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OLIVER69:

I made a song for one of my exes that I may still love. Gimme feedback please

OLIVER69:

Verse One: I wish I still had his love. The way you whisper in the dark His blue eyes Every turn a surprise Chorus: The way you bring laughter into a room All I want is freedom Having romantic fun at an amusement park, riding the Ferris wheel and watching the sunset And pleasin’ together forever through rain or whatever Verse Two: Together forever because my heart is yours He looks so, so pretty when I sleep The past guys don't matter anymore Where you stay in my heart forever Chorus: The way you bring laughter into a room And when you find me there you’ll search no more Having romantic fun at an amusement park, riding the Ferris wheel and watching the sunset The smell of his hair

Twinzz:

this is so cute

summerrayne:

omg this was amazing and absolutely perfect I personally love it and if you think that you still love him and that he is worth it then I personally think that you should go for it.

whyjustwhy:

Woah :0, too good

vanessad123:

reminds me of my ex🧍🏽‍♀, but I like it. its cute and relatable

Omens:

Very sweet, but yet sad. I love it!

xnonangiex:

me like

Semaj123:

Mmmmmmmm

bellareee13:

That is amazing 🤩🤩

Robloxl0ver223:

this is so gyat rizzler

Rosee5656:

It's nice...

Donavan101:

@oliver69 I can publish this song out into the world if I have full permission It would located in Bandlab.

euphoriiic:

oh ok.

Arizona:

love the song

angelina13779:

100/10

OLIVER69:

@donavan101 wrote:
@oliver69 I can publish this song out into the world if I have full permission It would located in Bandlab.
No thank you. I don't want it too. It's reserved for one person's ears only. And have the sound that goes with it already. So thank you but no

Donavan101:

@oliver69 wrote:
@donavan101 wrote:
@oliver69 I can publish this song out into the world if I have full permission It would located in Bandlab.
No thank you. I don't want it too. It's reserved for one person's ears only. And have the sound that goes with it already. So thank you but no
No problem

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