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St4r:

Oh, the lies that were told, the secrets kept tight, A web of deceit, a heart full of spite. The words that were spoken, the pain they did bring, A love that was lost, a heart that did sting. You said you were true, but it was all a ruse, A game you played, with my heart as the muse. You cheated and lied, but now you deny, The hurt you inflicted, the tears that I cry. But I see through your lies, your false apology, Your words are empty, your heart full of hypocrisy. You may think you're free, but you're not, Your actions have consequences, and they're not forgot. You may think you've won, but you've lost, My love, my trust, my heart, it's all cost. You may think you're happy, but you're not, For the love we had, is now lost, forever to rot.

Alexisback:

Like the poem, it's pretty good

St4r:

Thank you

Alexisback:

@st4r wrote:
Thank you
np do u write peoms a lot?

St4r:

Yeah

Alexisback:

@st4r wrote:
Yeah
thats cool actually

Alexisback:

@st4r wrote:
Yeah
i wrote peoms before there somewhere i need to find them

St4r:

oh ok

Alexisback:

yea ima find them and ill send them to you

St4r:

ok

euphoriiic:

sad but really good

St4r:

Thanks

Anvil:

@euphoriiic wrote:
sad but really good
real

Arizona:

great job

St4r:

Ty

Rosee5656:

Love it! great job its fantastic

St4r:

Thankss

Ylynnaa:

i love it

vanessad123:

I rlly like thiss, I can relate to dis poem nglšŸ¤ good job beautifulll

St4r:

Thankss

vanessad123:

@st4r wrote:
Thankss
ywww

Nilae:

slay i love it.

St4r:

ty

Nilae:

ofc

snowie:

It's amazing!!!!

St4r:

ty sm

Anvil:

this is rlly good !

St4r:

Thank you

Beel:

*flashbacks of my past*. ty for the memory rewind. You wrote it amazing.

Taybae:

Real shi, i fw it tho .

Rosee5656:

mhm

Rosee5656:

@l8rval wrote:
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