wrote a poem
comment plzz what yall think

Drowning
Drowning… In a sea of regret and sorrow
This pain… Is endless its driving me insane
My bestfriend no other than the blade itsself
Cutting deep and quick letting loose a
Stream of red Hurting… on the inside and out
No escape from this depth of darkness Kicking
And screaming will do you no good
No one in this world cares about you the way
You wish they would swirling… down a void of
anguish trying to pull yourself out only causes you
To fall in deeper Breaking… into a millon and one
Pieces no amount of duct tape and glue could ever
Peice and mend you back together Dying… by the time
You relize its much to late no time for i’m sorrys and oh god
Please wait Empty… fading away the lights dimming and and
Pulling away Drowning… in a sea of blood… its already over
I’m gone... Done

Question

wrote a poem
comment plzz what yall think

Drowning 
Drowning… In a sea of regret and sorrow
 This pain… Is endless its driving me insane 
My bestfriend no other than the blade itsself
Cutting deep and quick letting loose a
Stream of red Hurting… on the inside and out 
No escape from this depth of darkness Kicking 
And screaming will do you no good
No one in this world cares about you the way 
You wish they would swirling… down a void of 
anguish trying to pull yourself out only causes you 
To fall in deeper Breaking… into a millon and one 
Pieces no amount of duct tape and glue could ever
Peice and mend you back together Dying… by the time 
You relize its much to late no time for i’m sorrys and oh god 
Please wait Empty… fading away the lights dimming and and 
Pulling away Drowning… in a sea of blood… its already over 
I’m gone... Done

y2kmwah · Answer

thats sad

jayfafr · Answer

W

Milawillalwaysbecool · Answer

I hope u drown irl

suger · Answer

@milawillalwaysbecool wrote:

I hope u drown irl

thank yew thank yew ^^

y2kmwah · Answer

oh

suger · Answer

@y2kmwah wrote:

thats sad

yep

y2kmwah · Answer

dont drown

suger · Answer

@y2kmwah wrote:

dont drown

i'll try not to lol

AngelAlpha · Answer

I might drown of my own tears after reading that.

y2kmwah · Answer

oh my

suger · Answer

@angelalpha wrote:

I might drown of my own tears after reading that.

awwe I'm sorry

y2kmwah · Answer

@suger wrote:

@milawillalwaysbecool wrote:

I hope u drown irl

thank yew thank yew ^^

ima cry bc "yew" is so adorable

suger · Answer

@y2kmwah wrote:

@suger wrote:

@milawillalwaysbecool wrote:

I hope u drown irl

thank yew thank yew ^^

ima cry bc "yew" is so adorable

lol i always say thank yew

y2kmwah · Answer

cute

zombieblud · Answer

@milawillalwaysbecool wrote:

I hope u drown irl

BROLMAO WHAT (the poem slays ig)

suger · Answer

@zombieblud wrote:

@milawillalwaysbecool wrote:

I hope u drown irl

BROLMAO WHAT (the poem slays ig)

thank yew thank yew

Z15 · Answer

girl I could turn tht into a deep rap song fr 10/10

suger · Answer

@z15 wrote:

girl I could turn tht into a deep rap song fr 10/10

ouuuh i would deffintly let youif ya tagged me in it an gave me my props

Z15 · Answer

ok sure

suger · Answer

@z15 wrote:

ok sure

^^

suger · Answer

@suger wrote:

@z15 wrote:

ok sure

^^

lemme see what iz like after you finish

euphoriiic · Answer

that's depressing but good job frl 🫶🏻.

MAGABACK · Answer

gj, took sadness down 2 a new level

suger · Answer

@euphoriiic wrote:

that's depressing but good job frl 🫶🏻.

thank yew