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OLIVER69:

I wrote a poem a little bit about how my week has been. It's called, "No one around." Tell me what you think.

OLIVER69:

You say you won’t leave me You broke my heart You choose her over me How could this week get worse? My best friend got shot, I got abused while watching her bleed. Once he was done with me, He said, “I’ll watch you everywhere you go.” I need someone to turn to. I’m scared for my life, The one person who I thought would never leave me, Left me. So why? Why should I continue? Continue living, continue feeling used, All for your little game. Why is it my ex comforted me more? I gave you my heart and he’s the one who saved me. I certainly hope you’re happy, ‘Cause I’m not. I say I’m okay I say that I’m fine, but I’ve been broken too many times. Why would you leave me? You say you love me, but you left me for her. You left after a year and more. Everything we had, you threw away for her. Am I not good enough? Did you wish I would’ve died last night? Sometimes I wish that guy shot me, Instead of my friend. I was covered in her blood last night, And where were you? Nowhere to be found, That’s where. Tell me why again why you choose her? What is so bad about me?

OLIVER69:

@autumnp @bravosix @ghostboy123 @williammcgeorge @bubblezz @whyjustwhy @midnight97 @snowie @aubree @sophial

OLIVER69:

@noface

Manny300303199:

Very deep man

suger:

awwe baby cakes i'm here for you till the end all you gotta do is talk to me

snowie:

how sad

Aratox:

Ouch man... that's scary :( if u wanna vent u can do so in our dms

SophiaL:

I'm so sorry...I don't know why someone would do that to you. You're so sweet and kind and funny. Who couldn't love that about you? Don't let that get to you. And you can pray to your friend. I bet she's watching over you right now, proud that you've made it this far. Im so happy to have a friend like you. If you need to talk, I'm here. Stay strong bestie!

Ghostboy123:

their are things that's happen n life like loosing your best friend and it happens to be really hard to let go people don't understand what they lost till the see that person more happy wit someone else the things that people says are hurtful but you also have me and all these other people where with you to support and love you its ok to cry its a part of life its happens to me a think that's you cant help but do . we all love you olly I love you and I will never stop loving you no matter the reason because you were their when I needed you and I will be here when your sad , mad , ect you are the best boyfriend I could ever have and so is Liam I would give my whole life for you both.. stay safe my angel <3

OutlawedKing:

@oliver69 wrote:
You say you won’t leave me You broke my heart You choose her over me How could this week get worse? My best friend got shot, I got abused while watching her bleed. Once he was done with me, He said, “I’ll watch you everywhere you go.” I need someone to turn to. I’m scared for my life, The one person who I thought would never leave me, Left me. So why? Why should I continue? Continue living, continue feeling used, All for your little game. Why is it my ex comforted me more? I gave you my heart and he’s the one who saved me. I certainly hope you’re happy, ‘Cause I’m not. I say I’m okay I say that I’m fine, but I’ve been broken too many times. Why would you leave me? You say you love me, but you left me for her. You left after a year and more. Everything we had, you threw away for her. Am I not good enough? Did you wish I would’ve died last night? Sometimes I wish that guy shot me, Instead of my friend. I was covered in her blood last night, And where were you? Nowhere to be found, That’s where. Tell me why again why you choose her? What is so bad about me?
What is so bad about you? How about being a gay faģ bro.

Ghostboy123:

the hell is wront with you. @outlawedking

Aratox:

@outlawedking reported, I sincerely hope your account gets banned.

OutlawedKing:

I don't know what "wront" is man.

OutlawedKing:

@aratox wrote:
@outlawedking reported, I sincerely hope your account gets banned.
I missed the part where that's my problem.

Aratox:

@outlawedking wrote:
@aratox wrote:
@outlawedking reported, I sincerely hope your account gets banned.
I missed the part where that's my problem.
I missed the part where I asked.

OutlawedKing:

I sincerely hope you can walk after I let Oliver and his boyfriend double team your asśhole.

Aratox:

🤷 your choice of getting banned, lil dude, if you keep bypassing the language filter.

OutlawedKing:

@aratox wrote:
🤷 your choice of getting banned, lil dude, if you keep bypassing the language filter.
Oh God what am I gonna do!!!!! 😱

OutlawedKing:

Oh yeah make a new account dipshìt

notmeta:

they can block y from making new account ;nerd emoji;

OutlawedKing:

@notmeta wrote:
they can block y from making new account ;nerd emoji;
Correction: They can try. 😏

notmeta:

they can try and it will work :p

Aratox:

@dude @shadow @elsa213 @umm

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