thoughts?

A love that could never be
In the name of love, where hearts entwine,
A tale of passion, so divine.
I am Romeo, you are my Juliet,
In a love story we shall never forget.
Like a burning star in the night,
Your presence fills me with delight.
Wildflowers bloom in your wake,
Igniting a fire no one can forsake.
I would scale mountains, cross the sea,
For you, my love, eternally.
Our love, a bond that shall never sever,
In this world, now and forever.

Question

thoughts?

A love that could never be
In the name of love, where hearts entwine,
A tale of passion, so divine.
I am Romeo, you are my Juliet,
In a love story we shall never forget.
Like a burning star in the night,
Your presence fills me with delight.
Wildflowers bloom in your wake,
Igniting a fire no one can forsake.
I would scale mountains, cross the sea,
For you, my love, eternally.
Our love, a bond that shall never sever,
In this world, now and forever.

arrivhn · Answer

did you write this

suger · Answer

@arrivhn wrote:

did you write this

yep

arrivhn · Answer

it's so pretty I read it a 100

suger · Answer

@arrivhn wrote:

it's so pretty I read it a 100

thank yeww

nobodynew · Answer

that's beautiful frrr<333

suger · Answer

@nobodynew wrote:

that's beautiful frrr<333

thank yew ^^

Midnight97 · Answer

Aww this is very very sweet, whoever you made this for will love it, good job

suger · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

Aww this is very very sweet, whoever you made this for will love it, good job

thank yew much ^^

Midnight97 · Answer

@suger wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

Aww this is very very sweet, whoever you made this for will love it, good job

thank yew much ^^

You're so welcome 😄

toga · Answer

good job

suger · Answer

@toga wrote:

good job

thank yew ^^

LightBearer123 · Answer

yeah very well written i love it :)

Midnight97 · Answer

@lightbearer123 wrote:

yeah very well written i love it :)

Yk I agree brother

suger · Answer

@lightbearer123 wrote:

yeah very well written i love it :)

thank yew thank yew ^^

LightBearer123 · Answer

your welcome :D

waideeeiscool · Answer

10/10

suger · Answer

@waideeeiscool wrote:

10/10

thank yew ^^

Midnight97 · Answer

@snowie

snowie · Answer

it's amazing!!!

suger · Answer

@snowie wrote:

it's amazing!!!

Thank yew much ^^

vanessad123 · Answer

I LOVE THIS, u should keep writing these FRFR🥺

suger · Answer

@vanessad123 wrote:

I LOVE THIS, u should keep writing these FRFR🥺

thank yew kindly ^^

XxMimiXx · Answer

This is amazing, very well written! 💫 and the words are very very powerful!! Keep it up and I would love to read more of your work!! 💖

suger · Answer

@xxmimixx wrote:

This is amazing, very well written! 💫 and the words are very very powerful!! Keep it up and I would love to read more of your work!! 💖

Thank yew very much ^^

XxMimiXx · Answer

@suger wrote:

@xxmimixx wrote:

This is amazing, very well written! 💫 and the words are very very powerful!! Keep it up and I would love to read more of your work!! 💖

Thank yew very much ^^

Yw!! 💫

y2kmwah · Answer

lol