Thoughts?

Drowning… In a sea of regret and sorrow
This pain… Is endless its driving me insane
My bestfriend no other than the blade itsself
Cutting deep and quick letting loose a
Stream of red Hurting… on the inside and out
No escape from this depth of darkness Kicking
And screaming will do you no good
No one in this world cares about you the way
You wish they would swirling… down a void of
anguish trying to pull yourself out only causes you
To fall in deeper Breaking… into a millon and one
Pieces no amount of duct tape and glue could ever
Peice and mend you back together Dying… by the time
You relize its much to late no time for i’m sorrys and oh god
Please wait Empty… fading away the lights dimming and and
Pulling away Drowning… in a sea of blood… its already over
I’m gone... Done

Question

Thoughts?

Drowning… In a sea of regret and sorrow
 This pain… Is endless its driving me insane 
My bestfriend no other than the blade itsself
Cutting deep and quick letting loose a
Stream of red Hurting… on the inside and out 
No escape from this depth of darkness Kicking 
And screaming will do you no good
No one in this world cares about you the way 
You wish they would swirling… down a void of 
anguish trying to pull yourself out only causes you 
To fall in deeper Breaking… into a millon and one 
Pieces no amount of duct tape and glue could ever
Peice and mend you back together Dying… by the time 
You relize its much to late no time for i’m sorrys and oh god 
Please wait Empty… fading away the lights dimming and and 
Pulling away Drowning… in a sea of blood… its already over 
I’m gone... Done

ihavewrizz · Answer

Fye

ihavewrizz · Answer

U good tho?

LightBearer123 · Answer

damn this is sad are you ok :(

suger · Answer

@ihavewrizz wrote:

U good tho?

i'm ok

suger · Answer

@lightbearer123 wrote:

damn this is sad are you ok :(

yea I'm fine

ihavewrizz · Answer

@suger wrote:

@ihavewrizz wrote:

U good tho?

i'm ok

Hmm ok

LightBearer123 · Answer

awww ok that's good

suger · Answer

@lightbearer123 wrote:

awww ok that's good

Thank yew thank yew for reading

LightBearer123 · Answer

you welcome your like a really good writer

Cocoloco · Answer

It's really good, I write songs and short stories and that's actually a lot better than everything I've written, you should really write more like this

Syrnn · Answer

oh

LILBOY · Answer

tsssss

suger · Answer

@cocoloco wrote:

It's really good, I write songs and short stories and that's actually a lot better than everything I've written, you should really write more like this

thank yew I'm sure the things you write are equally as amazing ^^