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OLIVER69:

So I wrote a poem for me ex who left me for his ex. It's called, "Better than Me".

OLIVER69:

You wanna run to her, Be my guest. I have more people who care abot me And i dont need.you breaking me. Youll never find no one better You may think shed your everything But in a year she'll be nothing Whats going to stop.your from doing what you did to me to her? You're far from the victim I defended you and i loved you, Im no longer letting you rip my heart out. I have friends and family, Who would fight for me. Youre a piece of Salsa, And so is she. You threw a year together, Memories and all. I won't lie, Ill miss what we had, But then again you'll Never find no one better than me Oh and your little girlfriend, is a Pie, Shes no better than a man. Just remember that she wont be able to satisfy you like I can. Everyone knows im really good in bed, So you're loss. Have a nice life.

snowie:

It's amazing dad

Williammcgeorge:

nice dear

Jemma:

Amazing, keep going

y2kmwah:

its good

hannahj:

"have a nice life", "Youre a piece of Salsa", "Oh and your little girlfriend, is a Pie" so good '-'

CecePitbull:

i like it!

waideeeiscool:

lmao this is so goofy

CecePitbull:

@waideeeiscool wrote:
lmao this is so goofy
You're goofy for judging. That's really wild, You're not happy with your own life so you decide to comment "rUdE' stuff on everything you see because deep down you're depressed and haven't touched grass in years. you find satisfaction in TRYING to be mean. but guess what bud, no one thinks it's funny. and no one says that anymore too. get a life man :/

waideeeiscool:

@cecepitbull wrote:
@waideeeiscool wrote:
lmao this is so goofy
You're goofy for judging. That's really wild, You're not happy with your own life so you decide to comment "rUdE' stuff on everything you see because deep down you're depressed and haven't touched grass in years. you find satisfaction in TRYING to be mean. but guess what bud, no one thinks it's funny. and no one says that anymore too. get a life man :/
I'm sorry to hear that you think I'm goofy for judging. But to be honest, your comment sounds pretty ridiculous and baseless. I'm perfectly happy with my life, and I have no reason to be depressed. I'm sorry if my comment offended you, but I don't appreciate your assumptions and generalizations about me. It's not cool to make assumptions about people you don't know. You should learn to mind your own business instead of trying to start fights online.

CecePitbull:

@waideeeiscool wrote:
@cecepitbull wrote:
@waideeeiscool wrote:
lmao this is so goofy
You're goofy for judging. That's really wild, You're not happy with your own life so you decide to comment "rUdE' stuff on everything you see because deep down you're depressed and haven't touched grass in years. you find satisfaction in TRYING to be mean. but guess what bud, no one thinks it's funny. and no one says that anymore too. get a life man :/
I'm sorry to hear that you think I'm goofy for judging. But to be honest, your comment sounds pretty ridiculous and baseless. I'm perfectly happy with my life, and I have no reason to be depressed. I'm sorry if my comment offended you, but I don't appreciate your assumptions and generalizations about me. It's not cool to make assumptions about people you don't know. You should learn to mind your own business instead of trying to start fights online.
I understand where you are coming from but I have scrolled through numerous posts and seen comments like "this is cringe" and other comments so you don't need to tell me about starting fights online when that's all I see you do. I saw you start a fight on one of my friend's posts to. cmon man make it make sense.

euphoriiic:

i'm not reading allat !!

CecePitbull:

personally i like the poem.

OLIVER69:

Woah Woah I found the comment, "this is goofy" funny. It could be worse, at least I wasn't called the f-slur in their comment... and i apologizes for the grammar mistakes

CecePitbull:

@oliver69 wrote:
Woah Woah I found the comment, "this is goofy" funny. It could be worse, at least I wasn't called the f-slur in their comment... and i apologizes for the grammar mistakes
its ok and woah. who called them the f slur?

euphoriiic:

but nyway. no.

OLIVER69:

@cecepitbull wrote:
@oliver69 wrote:
Woah Woah I found the comment, "this is goofy" funny. It could be worse, at least I wasn't called the f-slur in their comment... and i apologizes for the grammar mistakes
its ok and woah. who called them the f slur?
it was someone on one of my other writing posts... it's okay because I'm used to it. So yeah

LILBOY:

Damn soo gooddd

CecePitbull:

@oliver69 wrote:
@cecepitbull wrote:
@oliver69 wrote:
Woah Woah I found the comment, "this is goofy" funny. It could be worse, at least I wasn't called the f-slur in their comment... and i apologizes for the grammar mistakes
its ok and woah. who called them the f slur?
it was someone on one of my other writing posts... it's okay because I'm used to it. So yeah
damn

hannahj:

@oliver69 wrote:
@cecepitbull wrote:
@oliver69 wrote:
Woah Woah I found the comment, “this is goofy” funny. It could be worse, at least I wasn’t called the f-slur in their comment... and i apologizes for the grammar mistakes
its ok and woah. who called them the f slur?
it was someone on one of my other writing posts... it’s okay because I’m used to it. So yeah
that’s sad 😞 I’m sorry olly 😢

Treeko:

sad

y2kmwah:

poopie

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