hey guys! I'm trying to write a song about graduating and entering a new era of life and would love if someone can help me:) here is what I have so far

Growing up used to seem so far away, now its just around the corner
So impatient to embrace future me, now I'm trynna pause this momment

As expectations get higher, my hearts beating faster
I'm still trynna figure out who I want to be

I promise not to disappoint, I promise not to fall apart but to sore through the sky with all the wisdom you've provided me
Thank you to my mom for all the love you bring
Thank you to my dad for inspiring me
Im proud of who I am

https://voca.ro/16jRXU0Ei94Z
(my melody idea..temporary for now)

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hey guys! I'm trying to write a song about graduating and entering a new era of life and would love if someone can help me:) here is what I have so far

Growing up used to seem so far away, now its just around the corner
So impatient to embrace future me, now I'm trynna pause this momment

As expectations get higher, my hearts beating faster
I'm still trynna figure out who I want to be

I promise not to disappoint, I promise not to fall apart but to sore through the sky with all the wisdom you've provided me
Thank you to my mom for all the love you bring
Thank you to my dad for inspiring me
Im proud of who I am

https://voca.ro/16jRXU0Ei94Z
(my melody idea..temporary for now)

Damion54 · Answer

Its a good song like honestly I wish someone would have done that when I graduated.

Alyzarose · Answer

@damion54 wrote:

Its a good song like honestly I wish someone would have done that when I graduated.

Thank you:) aww lol yeah I plan on performing this for my senior banquet at school if I get picked. I wanted to do something really meaning full

vanessad123 · Answer

This is so good, I think now u need to just write on what u felt when u barely started and how u feel know that yk ur graduating yk?

Damion54 · Answer

@alyzarose wrote:

@damion54 wrote:

Its a good song like honestly I wish someone would have done that when I graduated.

Thank you:) aww lol yeah I plan on performing this for my senior banquet at school if I get picked. I wanted to do something really meaning full

All I can say is good luck

vanessad123 · Answer

oh wait😭 mbmb I read through it to fast, u did write da

Alyzarose · Answer

@vanessad123 wrote:

This is so good, I think now u need to just write on what u felt when u barely started and how u feel know that yk ur graduating yk?

Thanks:) mm yeah you right haha its hard to put thoughts into lyrics

Alyzarose · Answer

@vanessad123 wrote:

oh wait😭 mbmb I read through it to fast, u did write da

LOLL silly

vanessad123 · Answer

@alyzarose wrote:

@vanessad123 wrote:

This is so good, I think now u need to just write on what u felt when u barely started and how u feel know that yk ur graduating yk?

Thanks:) mm yeah you right haha its hard to put thoughts into lyrics

ywww loll

Donavan101 · Answer

Hello is this still available? I would like to help in anyways possible.

snowie · Answer

It's amazing!!!

Donavan101 · Answer

@snowie wrote:

It's amazing!!!

It's beautiful actually

Syrnn · Answer

it should rhyme

LILBOY · Answer

its really good buh i agree wit syrnn

Donavan101 · Answer

not all rhyme

Alyzarose · Answer

@donavan101 wrote:

Hello is this still available? I would like to help in anyways possible.

yeah it is:)

Alyzarose · Answer

@snowie wrote:

It's amazing!!!

thanks!!

Alyzarose · Answer

@syrnn wrote:

it should rhyme

its the way you sing it, it doesn't have to rhyme especially if its poetic. some of the best songs have lines that don't rhyme but have good meaning. but I'll keep this in mind thanks

Donavan101 · Answer

@alyzarose wrote:

@syrnn wrote:

it should rhyme

its the way you sing it, it doesn't have to rhyme especially if its poetic. some of the best songs have lines that don't rhyme but have good meaning. but I'll keep this in mind thanks

I would agree.

Manny300303199 · Answer

I really like it tbh

Midnight97 · Answer

It is very good, keep it up

XxMimiXx · Answer

Aww!!! Alyza!!! 🥹 This is amazing as always!! You're so talented! 🫶 Can't wait to hear it when it's finished ✨

Alyzarose · Answer

@manny300303199 wrote:

I really like it tbh

thanks!

Alyzarose · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

It is very good, keep it up

thank u!

Alyzarose · Answer

@xxmimixx wrote:

Aww!!! Alyza!!! 🥹 This is amazing as always!! You're so talented! 🫶 Can't wait to hear it when it's finished ✨

Hiiiii babes!!!!! Thank youuuuu!! I GOT U GIRL! MUWAH

XxMimiXx · Answer

@alyzarose wrote:

@xxmimixx wrote:

Aww!!! Alyza!!! 🥹 This is amazing as always!! You're so talented! 🫶 Can't wait to hear it when it's finished ✨

Hiiiii babes!!!!! Thank youuuuu!! I GOT U GIRL! MUWAH

You're very welcome ✨ and yesss lmk!

chuckthedonut · Answer

this is really good, i love how you finished it with "im proud of who i am" especially because a lot of people out there arent proud of who they are, so i really like how you truly are proud of who you are. you did such an amazing job. <3

Alexisback · Answer

wow just wow

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

same. Think you could help?

hannahj · Answer

cool

KIllerwolfdaone · Answer

The song is good so far, but if want to make a song about it, talk about your experiences of it

DorianIsHere · Answer

its for real insanely good, but I've made music for two years so if you wanna talk about it sometime we can.