Hello there. I made a poem for my husband @Williammcgeorge ... If you don't have anything nice to say, well don't even bother to comment. Thank you to those who are kind.

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OLIVER69 · Answer

You were always there for me,
You had my heart,
There’s no another person,
I wish to have captured my heart

You’re the most gentle guy there is,
Everyone seems to enjoy your presence.
You’re not afraid to fight for me,
You keep loving me.

I’m happy I get to call you mine.
There’s no one else better than you,
If you think so then prove me wrong,
Show me this better person,
That’s right you can’t.
I’ll never leave you.

You have my heart,
Please don’t break it or use it badly.
You know I’ve been hurt before,
So don’t let you be the reason I cry at night.

Be the reason I smile,
The reason I forget my ex,
The reason I’m overprotective,
The reason I get jealous,
The reason I AM happy

You know I would kill anyone for your love,
A year together and no one will tear us apart.
You are the only one for me.

With all my heart,
Love, your Olly.

arrivhn · Answer

how old are you

OLIVER69 · Answer

@arrivhn wrote:

how old are you

I'm not answering that in the comments, it's considered spam. If you would like to know DM me

Manny300303199 · Answer

I like the poem. Very thoughtful

OLIVER69 · Answer

@manny300303199 wrote:

I like the poem. Very thoughtful

Thank you so much! ^^

Manny300303199 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@manny300303199 wrote:

I like the poem. Very thoughtful

Thank you so much! ^^

Np mate. You have a great talent for writing

Williammcgeorge · Answer

aww

snowie · Answer

It's very good, you have a talent for writing good poems

xcoledd1 · Answer

father this is soooooooooo good you did a good job on it

Z15 · Answer

best poem I've read so far 10/10 frfr I might evern change it up a bit and maybr even rewrite it for my gf :)

OLIVER69 · Answer

@snowie wrote:

It's very good, you have a talent for writing good poems

Thank you so much, son.

OLIVER69 · Answer

@xcoledd1 wrote:

father this is soooooooooo good you did a good job on it

Thank you, I tried my hardest you know

xcoledd1 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@xcoledd1 wrote:

father this is soooooooooo good you did a good job on it

Thank you, I tried my hardest you know

well you did good i want be like you

OLIVER69 · Answer

@z15 wrote:

best poem I've read so far 10/10 frfr I might evern change it up a bit and maybr even rewrite it for my gf :)

That's fine by me, and that's real nice. Thank you and good luck re-writing it for your gf if you do

OLIVER69 · Answer

@xcoledd1 wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

@xcoledd1 wrote:

father this is soooooooooo good you did a good job on it

Thank you, I tried my hardest you know

well you did good i want be like you

Aww you're so sweet

OLIVER69 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@xcoledd1 wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

@xcoledd1 wrote:

father this is soooooooooo good you did a good job on it

Thank you, I tried my hardest you know

well you did good i want be like you

Aww you're so sweet

but be yourself

jayfafr · Answer

ts fire

xcoledd1 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@xcoledd1 wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

@xcoledd1 wrote:

father this is soooooooooo good you did a good job on it

Thank you, I tried my hardest you know

well you did good i want be like you

Aww you're so sweet

but be yourself

ok *thumbs up*

OLIVER69 · Answer

@jayfafr wrote:

ts fire

thanks lol

Coyote · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

You were always there for me, You had my heart, There’s no another person, I wish to have captured my heart You’re the most gentle guy there is, Everyone seems to enjoy your presence. You’re not afraid to fight for me, You keep loving me. I’m happy I get to call you mine. There’s no one else better than you, If you think so then prove me wrong, Show me this better person, That’s right you can’t. I’ll never leave you. You have my heart, Please don’t break it or use it badly. You know I’ve been hurt before, So don’t let you be the reason I cry at night. Be the reason I smile, The reason I forget my ex, The reason I’m overprotective, The reason I get jealous, The reason I AM happy You know I would kill anyone for your love, A year together and no one will tear us apart. You are the only one for me. With all my heart, Love, your Olly.

Pure talent. Keep up the good work. I felt that. (:

OLIVER69 · Answer

Thank you so much @coyote it means a lot