Question

wrote this song for my art class
Verse 1)
Heartbeat boomin' like a bass in my chest (uh oh)
One wrong move, I put their love to the test (watch out)
Walkin' on tightropes, gotta keep my head straight (gotta be good)
Paranoia partyin' in my brain, all day, all night (in my head)
(Pre-Chorus)
"Don't make waves, don't cause a scene, keep your feelings on the shelf" (They always say)
But this silence is a scream, trapped inside myself (Can't take it anymore)
(Chorus)
Paranoia whispers in my ear, "One mistake and their love disappears"
Gotta be perfect, gotta be good, a robot child misunderstood
Is this who I am, this shell of a child? Trapped in a world where I run so wild, in my mind my actions so vile
(Verse 2)
Friends all ask, "Why so quiet?" But the answer feels like a burning riot
Inside my chest, a screaming plea, "To be myself, just set me free!"
But the fear holds tight, a chilling grip, the monster under the approval ship
If I fall short, if I don't succeed, will their love for me simply bleed?
(Chorus)
Paranoia whispers in my ear, "One mistake and their love disappears"
Gotta be perfect, gotta be good, a robot child misunderstood
Is this who I am, this shell of a child? Trapped in a world where I run so wild, in my mind my actions so vile
(Bridge)
The voice inside, a hollow cry, drowning out hope with a teary eye (Paranoia reigns)
Maybe this is all I'll ever be, a quiet girl, unseen, eternally
A quiet girl, a heart turned cold and still (Lost and broken)
Just another shadow, their love never to fulfill

Answer 1

dont steal please i plan to make this for tiktok a offical song is it good?

Answer 2

I think its great

Answer 3

coolioo.

Answer 4

Niceee

Answer 5

nicceee

Answer 6

writing songs for art is crzy

Answer 7

real

Answer 8

nice one ☝️

Answer 9

nice

Answer 10

Nice job - you'd need to correctly put this in music as for it ties into that - but nether the less good job! keep it up.

Answer 11

I would listen to this, just by the lyrics I think it's pretty fire