So I made a poem, um tell me what you think

poem name: The boy who got my heart

In his eyes, I see the stars,
In his smile, I feel the sun,
In his touch, I find my peace,
In his heart, I know I’ve won.

He’s the boy who stole my heart,
The one who makes my world complete,
His love is like a work of art,
A masterpiece that’s oh-so-sweet.

I thank the stars above each night,
For bringing him into my life,
I love him more than words can write,
Forever, he’ll be my heart’s delight.

So here’s my love poem for the boy,
Who’s captured my heart and soul,
I’ll love him with all my joy,
And never let him go.

Question

So I made a poem, um tell me what you think

poem name: The boy who got my heart

In his eyes, I see the stars,
In his smile, I feel the sun,
In his touch, I find my peace,
In his heart, I know I’ve won.

He’s the boy who stole my heart,
The one who makes my world complete,
His love is like a work of art,
A masterpiece that’s oh-so-sweet.

I thank the stars above each night,
For bringing him into my life,
I love him more than words can write,
Forever, he’ll be my heart’s delight.

So here’s my love poem for the boy,
Who’s captured my heart and soul,
I’ll love him with all my joy,
And never let him go.

XxMimiXx · Answer

Who this about? 🤨 but besides that...It's goood. Great Job 🫶 Keep posting sis, your poems are getting better and better.

WDW4Life · Answer

@xxmimixx wrote:

Who this about? 🤨 but besides that...It's goood. Great Job 🫶 Keep posting sis, your poems are getting better and better.

ughhhhhhh it's about no one just decided to edit an old poem from the past

WDW4Life · Answer

oh and thanks❤‍🔥

XxMimiXx · Answer

If you say soo but yup yw!

LOLIAteYourMom · Answer

love it :)

WDW4Life · Answer

@loliateyourmom wrote:

love it :)

Thanks 😊

LOLIAteYourMom · Answer

@wdw4life wrote:

@loliateyourmom wrote:

love it :)

Thanks 😊

np

euphoriiic · Answer

coolioo

MAGABACK · Answer

I think its good. gj

WDW4Life · Answer

@euphoriiic wrote:

coolioo

Thanks

WDW4Life · Answer

@magaback wrote:

I think its good. gj

thank you