Question

This is a story I am making let me know what you think of it

Answer 1

The battle was long, and cold. Nothing but bones and blood, and what sounds like a baby crying…A baby who lost his parents in the war. 17 years have gone by and the baby is a teen who is learning to survive. He looks around and sees a place to go for the night, so he heads for the bar…
He walks in and looks around to make sure he’s the only one in there, after he looked he walked to a table and he sits down~ “ It’s safe for now, by morning I will head out again” he thought. He lays down and falls asleep…

Answer 2

It looks good so far!!!

Answer 3

Here's the next part

Answer 4

It’s been days since the last time he ate, he has given himself a name, the war came to him, so he’s been running from it… “ it’s been days, why are they still after me?” he thought…
He hides behind a tree and waits for them to pass.. “ I didn’t do anything to them, they need to leave me alone, I really don’t want to hurt them..” he thought..

Answer 5

@snowie @oliver69

Answer 6

It's very good so far, and I love it!!!!

Answer 7

@baddestgirl

Answer 8

Oh my god, that is beautiful. I really like this little story and I am definitely looking forward to more of it. Sometimes I just skim-read things, but I actually wanted to read. Keep up the good work. <3

Answer 9

nice!

Answer 10

9/10 good job

Answer 11

Love it bestie

Answer 12

Y'all lucky if yalls have dads ;-;

Answer 13

I'm adopted

Answer 14

I got no dads they end up leaving me 🤷🏻‍♀️

Answer 15

same tht y im adopted

Answer 16

Aww, having dads leave is the worst. The only reason I'm a father here is too make sure everyone smiles and is genuinely happy and not faking anything. And well I can't be a mother, haha. I'm sorry you guys have gone through that.

Answer 17

I don't have a rp dad because he left me and said mean ish like I am worthless and some other ish

Answer 18

thts messed up

Answer 19

Well apparently my family is ashamed of me so 🤷🏻‍♀️

Answer 20

thts y your my bestie. Can I be you child asw 😂

Answer 21

happy endings am i right lol

Answer 22

And to be respectful, I ask all my kids their pronouns, so I know what to call them. And fyi, I will call all my children sweetie, just saying, so @alphaxtiger what are your pronouns?

Answer 23

I am a hershey LOL tht is some good chocolate

Answer 24

He woke up when he felt rain on his face.. “Crap it’s raining..” he said out loud.. The soldiers heard him. One of the soldiers yelled “ He’s over here”... He gets up~ “ Crap they heard me” he thought..
He runs off until he finds a cave.. “ they will keep following me till I am dead, I gotta fight back!” He thought… He puts his hand on his leg and grabs his knife.. The soldiers” Where did that kid go?” they said… But what they didn’t know is that he is in the cave getting ready to attack..He yells “ Leave me alone, what did I never do to you, just go a…..” They shoot at him.. As they shoot at him, he backs up into the cave.. “Ugh.. My leg.” He thought. He put his hand on his leg, when he removed his hand there was blood..

Answer 25

Coffee grounder I adore that a lot, and thanks for sharing your pronouns

Answer 26

WAIT CAN I BE A MICROWAVE

Answer 27

@XxhellokittyxX
BAHAHAGAGGAHAHHAH 😂😂

Answer 28

W

Answer 29

im hungry but i dont wanna eat

Answer 30

Im hungry but like... I don't feel like eating bc at the same time I am not hungry


Someone pls tell it makes since to someone else besides me 😭🥲

Answer 31

@alphaXtiger wait you gotta new dad 💀

Answer 32

OMGOSHHHHH IM NOT SINGLE ANYMORE SOMEONE LOVES ME 🫨🫨🫨

Answer 33

Mb had a moment 🥲😂😂

Answer 34

lol

Answer 35

play w me

Answer 36

I would if I wasn't on phone ;-;

Answer 37

lol

Answer 38

i will heylemanna

Answer 39

alr

Answer 40

Please stop spamming on my post, thank you

Answer 41

Srry

Answer 42

srry