Question

Hey, I made another poem but idk what to name it any ideas?

Sleepless night, the mind in flight,
Fears and worries, all in sight,
Broken and battered, we seek a fix,
But what's shattered, can't be fixed.

We cry out for help, but no one hears,
Our pain and struggles met with sneers,
You don't care about us, mentally or physically,
Our plight was ignored and dismissed so easily.

Now we're scared of you, and what you'll do,
To fix what's broken, without a clue,
But what's shattered, can't be fixed,
No matter how hard you try, it won't be fixed.

So listen to us, hear our cries,
Help us heal before our spirit dies,
Care for us, mentally and physically,
And maybe then, we'll find peace and serenity.

Answer 1

w.o.w this is good

Answer 2

Broken Nights? 👀 gave me that vibe. But great work ✨

Answer 3

Yw

Answer 4

gud

Answer 5

coolio

Answer 6

noice

Answer 7

w very good

Answer 8

How about "Shattered Peace: A Cry for Help"? The poem seems to touch upon the themes of brokenness, the need for help, and the hope for healing and peace.

Answer 9

good

Answer 10

jus name it "another sleepless night" that way it doesnt give away too much about the poem

Answer 11

good