I'm back after taking a break, what do you guys think about the sequel to my past story The Runner, Mountain of Memories
Please put suggestions in the comments https://www.quotev.com/story/16332051/Mountain-of-Memories

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Prettygirl099 · Answer

its good

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

@prettygirl099 wrote:

its good

Thank you

Prettygirl099 · Answer

@serolitovmaytasho wrote:

@prettygirl099 wrote:

its good

Thank you

np

Karina2222 · Answer

It was amazing

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

@karina2222 wrote:

It was amazing

tysm

toga · Answer

First, consider adding more depth to your characters. Develop their personalities, motivations, and backstories to make them more relatable and interesting to readers.

Second, focus on creating a well-defined and immersive setting. Describe the environment, atmosphere, and culture of the world you have created to make it more believable and engaging.

Third, pay attention to the pacing of your story. Make sure that the plot unfolds at a reasonable pace, with enough tension and conflict to keep readers engaged.

Serolitovmaytasho · Answer

@toga wrote:

First, consider adding more depth to your characters. Develop their personalities, motivations, and backstories to make them more relatable and interesting to readers. Second, focus on creating a well-defined and immersive setting. Describe the environment, atmosphere, and culture of the world you have created to make it more believable and engaging. Third, pay attention to the pacing of your story. Make sure that the plot unfolds at a reasonable pace, with enough tension and conflict to keep readers engaged.

alright, thank you for the suggestions, I will work on all that you've said