a story that i made a long time ago i think its bad but idk

Once there was a killer and he was no killer he was a no good killer if u killed him he would never die he keep getting up…..Everyone knows theres a end to a killer.he kills people in there sleep he even kills then when they are out alone at night.his eyes were pitch black.and he only wears a black robe.

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a story that i made a long time ago i think its bad but idk

Once there was a killer and he was no killer he was a no good killer if u killed him he would never die he keep getting up…..Everyone knows theres a end to a killer.he kills people in there sleep he even kills then when they are out alone at night.his eyes were pitch black.and he only wears a black robe.

Damion54 · Answer

OOOOO make more plzzzzzz

alphaXtiger · Answer

@damion54 wrote:

OOOOO make more plzzzzzz

will do

alphaXtiger · Answer

i made this a long time ago also

THE BIG RED DOT
Once i was in my bed sleeping i woke up to a light but it was no other kind of light it was a red dot i wanted to look at it but i was too sleepy to so i slept for a little when i woke  up i saw it again and i wanted it to go away but it did not so i go up got changed and went outside i walk toward it when i went toward it. It looked like a bird face with red eyes it was very big the sizes of a horse but human like i did not know what to do but i had to run or i would be killed i did not want to die not at the age of 13 when i was running back i heard a sound of a birdish sound it was creepy i almost screamed so kept waking back without looking back when i did it was in front of me i ran i just kept running when i did i ran into something it was my house so i walked inside my mom was still sleeping even my dad i walked up to my brothers room i woke him up he said” are u ok why did u wake me up” i told him about the big bird he told me” it is not real its just a dream now go back to bed” so i did i closed my window blinds and went back to sleep when i did i had a dream about the big red dot and the big bird the scary one i woke up in the morning to a big bird in my room i steamed and my mom came up and said are u ok i said yes my dad came up and wanted to talk to me about something and i said something about this big scary big bird and red eyes it was not a red dot it was a eye when i told him about it he told me “ it is called the big plague doctor  he was a good prison but he can  be bad sometime”
Then he went back downstairs. I hated that night so I never went outside ever again.

jayfafr · Answer

this is good i like it

alphaXtiger · Answer

@jayfafr wrote:

this is good i like it

thx :>>>>>>

Aratox · Answer

@alphaxtiger wrote:

i made this a long time ago also THE BIG RED DOT Once i was in my bed sleeping i woke up to a light but it was no other kind of light it was a red dot i wanted to look at it but i was too sleepy to so i slept for a little when i woke up i saw it again and i wanted it to go away but it did not so i go up got changed and went outside i walk toward it when i went toward it. It looked like a bird face with red eyes it was very big the sizes of a horse but human like i did not know what to do but i had to run or i would be killed i did not want to die not at the age of 13 when i was running back i heard a sound of a birdish sound it was creepy i almost screamed so kept waking back without looking back when i did it was in front of me i ran i just kept running when i did i ran into something it was my house so i walked inside my mom was still sleeping even my dad i walked up to my brothers room i woke him up he said” are u ok why did u wake me up” i told him about the big bird he told me” it is not real its just a dream now go back to bed” so i did i closed my window blinds and went back to sleep when i did i had a dream about the big red dot and the big bird the scary one i woke up in the morning to a big bird in my room i steamed and my mom came up and said are u ok i said yes my dad came up and wanted to talk to me about something and i said something about this big scary big bird and red eyes it was not a red dot it was a eye when i told him about it he told me “ it is called the big plague doctor he was a good prison but he can be bad sometime” Then he went back downstairs. I hated that night so I never went outside ever again.

Is this based on a true story?

alphaXtiger · Answer

i wish :>

alphaXtiger · Answer

but no i just come up with whatever comes to mind

Aratox · Answer

@alphaxtiger wrote:

but no i just come up with whatever comes to mind

oh ok

BlackStarSoulEater · Answer

Very good kee it up 😁

alphaXtiger · Answer

@blackstarsouleater wrote:

Very good kee it up 😁

thanks ^^

Sandy99 · Answer

Whoa they are good keep it up