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axie:

poem <3

axie:

I don’t mean to be annoying but i couldn’t but notice You have very pretty chocolate brown eyes and the sparkle keeps me on notice You have the most pretty and dark lashes ive ever seen Do you use makeup just to keep your eyes from shining so bright? I would need not even a map but a navigation system if i stared for too long Ide get lost too fast Do you hate them? Do you criticize every little thing about yourself that no one else notices? I know I do, I know I do. God im annoying but i couldn’t help but notice I was sitting across the room and your smile was blinding Are you aware that your beautiful and i'm not just saying that I'm actually in love with the way your smile lights up a small room It can’t be a large one because then i'm not focused Ide take in all your beauty and not be able to notice When you laugh you sound like an angel from space It echoes in my head and it shows on my face Maybe i'm wrong, and maybe you're right But your smile is what's keeping me up at night Do you criticize every little thing about yourself that no one will notice I know I do, I know I do. I don’t mean to focus on only the little details But if I look at your eyes then mine become unfocused If i look at your smile then mine goes away God your so perfect but ill never say I only write these poems as a coping method today I hope we can read them when we are in love one day Or maybe we both are over thinking and will never say this I know I do, I know I do.

dirtysoda:

me like

Luigi0210:

W poem

karissafrazier:

what lui said, it's a W

karissafrazier:

so who u got a crush on

axie:

oh i wrote this like two years ago, i was just reading my journals as was gah dayum im a hopeless romantic.

euphoriiic:

cutsie

golenxsilver:

nice it was touching i wish my bf said something like that

Sailor:

Beautiful poem oomfie, its very descriptive. Kinda gives me a hopeless romantic type vibe tho tbh x3

Extrinix:

woohooooooo love it bro

Extrinix:

Better than mine>>>>

toga:

good job @axie

luhbabyliyahh:

W frfr

ShadowWolf95:

It is really good, keep it up (:

Madelineee:

nice axie

Rosee5656:

good job axie

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