Question

I will tell you a story once upon a time there was a boyfriend a a girlfriend the girlfriend told the boyfriend that if he could go a whole day without talking to her she would love him forever so the boyfriend agreed without knowing she only had 24 hours to live so after the day was up the bf went to see the girlfriend but tears fell from his eyes as he saw her casket but inside was a note it said "you did it for one day now do it forever i love you" The end real story btw you should always value your time with the people you love

Answer 1

Damn, ty for da tbh. I needed that cuz I noticed I havnt been valuing the time I got with the people I love.

Answer 2

k

Answer 3

no one ever valued the time i spent with them

Answer 4

oop

Answer 5

k

Answer 6

real

Answer 7

The context seems familiar and the originality is very questionable. However, if you have re-written this and asking for a “writing” feedback, I would say that there is a lot of punctuation mistakes and run-on sentences. What do you wish to get from your audience by posting this?

Answer 8

Dam bro that's coolio