Question

Can you guys give me feedback on this book I'm writing?
The angry violent trees tossed and turned in the distance creating a new way of nausea. Even though it is quite a while before the storm makes it’s way over here in the part of the county, there’s nothing stopping the pain awaiting for me. I fished out my phone from my bag lying in the warm car. I was parked near a gas station. I was getting a specific type of headphones that my therapist had told me to get. I think it was called high fidelity headphones.
I stared at the lock screen for a few seconds and finally decided to unlock it. I opened up spotify and began scrolling through playlist choices I can choose from. I need one where I can be kept at peace but at the same time not fall asleep. After 5 minutes or so I picked a suitable playlist and popped in the non wireless ear pods and opened the front car door and exited the small dimmed space.

My name is Jada Stone. I am just a semi-regular 17 year old girl. Of course I have some flaws, but this one. This one, is different. I have Auditory Tactile Synesthesia. It is a form of synesthesia that means that any given sounds that you hear will make you feel touch-based sensations. You can say that it is like an Asmr but it’s also not at the same time. Asmr is filled with calming positivity and gentle sensations. In Auditory Tactile Synesthesia, you feel both the good and the bad. Ideally once you hear this term, you start to question what the heck it is. It’s a rare form so not that much people are born with it. Popular forms that you might know are Colored hearing, Chromesthesia, and Spatial sequence. This is not and happy Asmr that you will enjoy.

“Jada sweetie, may you pass me the orange juice please?” My mom asked in a soft tone, trying not to set off my synesthesia.
Ever since I’ve been diagnosis with this neurological condition, my mom had told my younger sister Jamie to speak with soft time when she is anywhere near me.

Answer 1

It is good, keep it up

Answer 2

its nice