—------------------------------------------------6—-----------------------------------------------
She giggled. “Mommy, mommy! Look!” She was dressed in a princess dress and had her hair with pink highlights.
“Beautiful Amelia!”
She was playing with her barbie dolls.
—------------------------------------------------------7—---------------------------------------------
“Mama!” She had purple in her hair this time. She was still playing with barbie dolls.
“Yes Amelia?”
“Look what my friend has!”
She had a phone.
—----------------------------------------------8—-----------------------------------------------
“Mama! Can I have a iPad?”
“An iPad.” I corrected her. “And no you may not you’re only 8!”
Amelia groaned. She hated being told no now.
—----------------------------------------------9—----------------------------------------------------------
“Mom, can I go to Skeet’s house?”
“Amelia! ‘Skeet’ is a boy, and that isn’t even his name! No!”
“Mom I wanna go! He’s my friend.”
“No!”
She stormed off.
—---------------------------------------------------------10—----------------------------------------------------
“Hey mom.” She had dyed her hair black, she was wearing makeup.
“Hey Amelia.”
“No call me Ray.”
“Ray is not you’re name.”
“Whatever mom.”
—---------------------------------------------11—--------------------------------------------------------
“Amelia.? You haven’t spoken to me.”
“Mom its not cool to talk to your parents like that anymore.”
“Mei mei…”
“Ugh don’t call me that!” She was playing on her iPad.
—-----------------------------------------------12—-----------------------------------------------
“Mom i want a phone.”
She was doing her makeup.
“Oh. Okay….”
“Hey Ray! Come over?” Her friend had called her. It was a guy.
—-----------------------------------------------13—------------------------------------------------------------
I got a call from the school. She started a fight.
She had her hair blonde now.
She said it was because they looked at her wrong.
Where did I go wrong..?

Question

—------------------------------------------------6—-----------------------------------------------      
She giggled. “Mommy, mommy! Look!” She was dressed in a princess dress and had her hair with pink highlights.
“Beautiful Amelia!” 
She was playing with her barbie dolls. 
—------------------------------------------------------7—---------------------------------------------
“Mama!” She had purple in her hair this time. She was still playing with barbie dolls.
“Yes Amelia?”
“Look what my friend has!” 
She had a phone.
—----------------------------------------------8—-----------------------------------------------
“Mama! Can I have a iPad?”
“An iPad.” I corrected her. “And no you may not you’re only 8!” 
Amelia groaned. She hated being told no now.
—----------------------------------------------9—----------------------------------------------------------
“Mom, can I go to Skeet’s house?” 
“Amelia! ‘Skeet’ is a boy, and that isn’t even his name! No!”
“Mom I wanna go! He’s my friend.”
“No!”
She stormed off.
—---------------------------------------------------------10—----------------------------------------------------
“Hey mom.” She had dyed her hair black, she was wearing makeup.
“Hey Amelia.”
“No call me Ray.”
“Ray is not you’re name.”
“Whatever mom.”
—---------------------------------------------11—--------------------------------------------------------
“Amelia.? You haven’t spoken to me.”
“Mom its not cool to talk to your parents like that anymore.”
“Mei mei…”
“Ugh don’t call me that!” She was playing on her iPad.
—-----------------------------------------------12—-----------------------------------------------
“Mom i want a phone.”
She was doing her makeup.
“Oh. Okay….”
“Hey Ray! Come over?” Her friend had called her. It was a guy.
—-----------------------------------------------13—------------------------------------------------------------
I got a call from the school. She started a fight.
She had her hair blonde now.
She said it was because they looked at her wrong.
Where did I go wrong..?

Beanie · Answer

Got bored, parents POV

Extrinix · Answer

@shadow subject change to Writing please.

MarioMx64 · Answer

nice story

hannahj · Answer

its decent but the other was better

abound · Answer

Can I be your mommy so you can giggle for me

abound · Answer

@beanie

Lebron20 · Answer

lol

@abound wrote:

Can I be your mommy so you can giggle for me

lol

whyjustwhy · Answer

I love itt

hellokitty265 · Answer

cool

Beanie · Answer

@abound wrote:

Can I be your mommy so you can giggle for me

what twt

Alanaaaaaaa · Answer

I like it. You should do some more and tag me in it.

Beanie · Answer

@alanaaaaaaa wrote:

I like it. You should do some more and tag me in it.

i will! i have state testing today so it may be a bit late but i will!