I've made a poem and it's a sonnet. Steal it from me, I will smack all of you. Feedback though?

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OLIVER69 · Answer

The Chaotic Dance of Love by Oliver Chaillaux

Oh, love can be a merry kind of mess, 
A dance where chaos leads the way each night; 
In tangled steps, we strive for sweet success, 
Yet stumble on, through shadows without light.

Two souls entwined in comedy's embrace, 
Attempting jests in moments fraught with fear; 
Anxiety lurks in the frenzied space, 
Where laughter rules, but doubt is always near.

Through differences that spark the fiery clash, 
We find our rhythm in this waltz of strife; 
A mix of joy and sorrow in one dash, 
Creating chaos in our shared life.

And though the path we walk is not serene, 
In love's wild tango, chaos reigns supreme.

Sailor · Answer

I'm not too familiar with errors in poems honestly so I can't give feedback about the less obvious things- But this a decent poem :D It's very deep honestly

AishaRadients · Answer

This is amazing, its really beautiful

Thayes · Answer

I love it

jayfafr · Answer

I'm stealing this

AishaRadients · Answer

NO

AishaRadients · Answer

DO IT AND I'LL HURT YOU

AishaRadients · Answer

NO ONE STEALS MY BESTIE'S WORK

OLIVER69 · Answer

It's okay, it's a joke and hella funny

AishaRadients · Answer

If u say so

jayfafr · Answer

the poem is really good actually now that I am reading it love 10/10

OLIVER69 · Answer

I have a feeling though most people just skimmed over it tbh lol, but thanks

AishaRadients · Answer

I DID NOT

AishaRadients · Answer

ITS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING EVER

jayfafr · Answer

@aisharadients wrote:

ITS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING EVER

yea it is tbh I'm not really good at poems like this

AishaRadients · Answer

I'm ok at them

OLIVER69 · Answer

@aisharadients wrote:

ITS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING EVER

Oh aww thanks bestie

AishaRadients · Answer

NP BESTIE

Lustforlana · Answer

I actually love this sm 10 out of 10 good job!

YoungBlood · Answer

im gonna STEAL this

Emperor · Answer

Olly, this is honestly an amazing poem. One of the best I've ever read. Please continue to write your amazing poems. You never seem to doubt me when you make them.🫶

SophiaL · Answer

GOOD JOB BESTIE

hellokitty265 · Answer

i stole it

SophiaL · Answer

lol

hellokitty265 · Answer

hehe nice poem tho

LovingChime · Answer

Ive already written this poem, he stole it from me. Everyone sue him.

2hrs · Answer

mid

OLIVER69 · Answer

@lovingchime wrote:

Ive already written this poem, he stole it from me. Everyone sue him.

says the one on level one and no you didn't... hahahahaha

LovingChime · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@lovingchime wrote:

Ive already written this poem, he stole it from me. Everyone sue him.

says the one on level one and no you didn't... hahahahaha

is bro flexing a questioncove smartscore? that is crazyyyyy

OLIVER69 · Answer

@2hrs wrote:

mid

Do not comment if you're just trying to level up. That comment is not needed

LovingChime · Answer

also learn to take a joke tbhh

OLIVER69 · Answer

@lovingchime wrote:

also learn to take a joke tbhh

That's why I said hahahahaha stupido

LovingChime · Answer

magic ban him

2hrs · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@2hrs wrote:

mid

Do not comment if you're just trying to level up. That comment is not needed

I'm being fr its mid

MakaylaChuck23 · Answer

attachment

LovingChime · Answer

@sllo ban him

LovingChime · Answer

@makaylachuck23 wrote:

sup

OLIVER69 · Answer

@lovingchime wrote:

magic ban him

haven't banned... and I don't need to be banned, did nothing wrong

MakaylaChuck23 · Answer

Bro all she said it's mid?

MakaylaChuck23 · Answer

take her answer

OLIVER69 · Answer

@2hrs wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

@2hrs wrote:

mid

Do not comment if you're just trying to level up. That comment is not needed

I'm being fr its mid

Okay could have typed a bit more, but mkay, thanks for feedback i guess

MakaylaChuck23 · Answer

ok

MakaylaChuck23 · Answer

👍

LovingChime · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@2hrs wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

@2hrs wrote:

mid

Do not comment if you're just trying to level up. That comment is not needed

I'm being fr its mid

Okay could have typed a bit more, but mkay, thanks for feedback i guess

add more details and sound more like shakespeare

OLIVER69 · Answer

@lovingchime wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

Um no, why would I want to sound like shakespearre, I is my own person, but I can add more details though... see that's good feedback

@2hrs wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

@2hrs wrote:

mid

Do not comment if you're just trying to level up. That comment is not needed

I'm being fr its mid

Okay could have typed a bit more, but mkay, thanks for feedback i guess

add more details and sound more like shakespeare

SophiaL · Answer

oop

LovingChime · Answer

@sophial wrote:

oop

you need more filters

MakaylaChuck23 · Answer

imagine

OLIVER69 · Answer

@lovingchime wrote:

@sophial wrote:

oop

you need more filters

Do not be rude to her.

SophiaL · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@lovingchime wrote:

@sophial wrote:

oop

you need more filters

Do not be rude to her.

thank you olly

OLIVER69 · Answer

@sophial wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

@lovingchime wrote:

@sophial wrote:

oop

you need more filters

Do not be rude to her.

thank you olly

Anything for you soph

hannahj · Answer

1000/10 <3

OLIVER69 · Answer

@hannahj wrote:

1000/10 <3

Thank you

hannahj · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

1000/10 <3

Thank you

yw :D

sllo · Answer

@lovingchime wrote:

@sllo ban him

Alright

LovingChime · Answer

@sllo wrote:

@lovingchime wrote:

@sllo ban him

Alright

thanks cutie

sllo · Answer

@lovingchime wrote:

@sllo wrote:

@lovingchime wrote:

@sllo ban him

Alright

thanks cutie

Yww Kitten

sllo · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

The Chaotic Dance of Love by Oliver Chaillaux Oh, love can be a merry kind of mess, A dance where chaos leads the way each night; In tangled steps, we strive for sweet success, Yet stumble on, through shadows without light. Two souls entwined in comedy's embrace, Attempting jests in moments fraught with fear; Anxiety lurks in the frenzied space, Where laughter rules, but doubt is always near. Through differences that spark the fiery clash, We find our rhythm in this waltz of strife; A mix of joy and sorrow in one dash, Creating chaos in our shared life. And though the path we walk is not serene, In love's wild tango, chaos reigns supreme.

You never made this, its Ai.

LovingChime · Answer

@sllo wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

The Chaotic Dance of Love by Oliver Chaillaux Oh, love can be a merry kind of mess, A dance where chaos leads the way each night; In tangled steps, we strive for sweet success, Yet stumble on, through shadows without light. Two souls entwined in comedy's embrace, Attempting jests in moments fraught with fear; Anxiety lurks in the frenzied space, Where laughter rules, but doubt is always near. Through differences that spark the fiery clash, We find our rhythm in this waltz of strife; A mix of joy and sorrow in one dash, Creating chaos in our shared life. And though the path we walk is not serene, In love's wild tango, chaos reigns supreme.

You never made this, its Ai.

magic is ai

sllo · Answer

@lovingchime wrote:

@sllo wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

The Chaotic Dance of Love by Oliver Chaillaux Oh, love can be a merry kind of mess, A dance where chaos leads the way each night; In tangled steps, we strive for sweet success, Yet stumble on, through shadows without light. Two souls entwined in comedy's embrace, Attempting jests in moments fraught with fear; Anxiety lurks in the frenzied space, Where laughter rules, but doubt is always near. Through differences that spark the fiery clash, We find our rhythm in this waltz of strife; A mix of joy and sorrow in one dash, Creating chaos in our shared life. And though the path we walk is not serene, In love's wild tango, chaos reigns supreme.

You never made this, its Ai.

magic is ai

Yea ofc its Ai dur

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