Question

here's a poem i wrote >~<

Answer 1

Friends become irrelevant in the face of death, Like cheap theater popcorn, When the movie starts with popcorn plenty of things don't feel so grim, But only for a moment Eventually the popcorn runs out, and when it does you are left alone to face the bad ending by yourself, the popcorn, It could never change the eventual outcome, It never mattered

Answer 2

Good job

Answer 3

Oh god yes~ Senpai this is literally amazing!!!

Answer 4

good job

Answer 5

@sllo

Answer 6

Thats super hot, i js cried 30 buckets

Answer 7

@goatygoat

Answer 8

Alts r real bc i already gave the medal 222 carry sOWwwwy ill give medal next time 🫶

Answer 9

yes bad @goatygoat no asking for medals donkey

Answer 10

@makaylachuck23

Answer 11

there be happy now :3

Answer 12

It's cute. But not all popcorn is finished. Most of the time it's sitting there waiting to be eaten, or is wasted on the floor or is thrown away. Not all friends are fake but the ones that aren't watch out for.

Answer 13

Holy smokes this is real good, keep up the good work.

Answer 14

cool

Answer 15

This is really good, good job!

Answer 16

lol

Answer 17

Do you have any popcorn left over though?

Answer 18

i love it it is really good

Answer 19

That's a good poem

Answer 20

I love this! I definetly feel it too, lol. For a bit of advice, try to do stanzas. If you don't know waht they are they are just like paragraphs but not full sentences. Here is an example!


Stanza 1:
Line 1: "You say he is a toy
Line 2: He's shy and maybe coy
Line 3: He isn't just a toy
Line 4: He's my boy"

Stanza 2:
Line 1: "My boy is all smiles
Line 2: The way you make him feel
Line 3: He feels like he should
Line 4: Be exiled"

Stanza 3:
Line 1: "My boy is my boy
Line 2: He is not a toy
Line 3: He's my boy
Line 4: You will never have him."



Or something like this. I labeled the lines as well, normally there are four lines in a stanza. So in Stanza 3, all four lines labeled Line 1, 2, 3, and 4, those make up the stanza. Try to do those, but I love it!

Answer 21

Omg so hotness good job

Answer 22

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