Question

Living The Pain Of Life: My poem i wrote :)\Life is a big store of
fruitless love, compassion,
Through smile it is an effort to hide pain inexpressible.
Life is beautiful and too deep to hold.
The sky of life is full of stars with dense clouds.
Love fruitful and fruitless go side by side.
Thy love is sunshine to me and heavy rainfall.
The cup of my heart is too full to contain.
The most musical song of life
is full of pain to the deepest core.
Life is a heap of painful emotion.
The season of summer comes to hide
The cloud full of rain,
The spring is a relief from chilly winter bite.
Autumn comes to fill us with thought inevitable,
To ruminate the utter futility of the glamour of life.
Autumn gives the glimpse of nothing.
The dim Sun hints the beauty of nothing,
The joy of not having anything.
The empty mind is the fullness of life divine.
With thy arrival sudden and unexpected,
Brings forth the joy though empty in the hand of time.
Life goes with no usefulness and it is the core.
The emptiness is the root and the root is empty.
Living is a great fallacy and waiting is useless.
Beyond the mind is death and it is unwilling to dawn,
The traces of mind art prone to ongoing dream.

Answer 1

is this good?

Answer 2

I like it! I think that you writing this you were expressing how you feel within this poem. I think that you should continue to share with us you feel and even through poems. It's beautiful. I write too so I know what it's like to be stuck on the outside. Ever need to talk my dms are open

Answer 3

aww tysmmmm

Answer 4

wowza

Answer 5

Wow