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Alanaaaaaaa:

1. It marks the beginning of a fresh day, yet it seems like everything is coming to an end. Still gathering the fragments of the shattered love you bestowed upon me. My world feels like it has come to a standstill, and my sun feels like it has ceased to burn. Have you ever witnessed the sun following heartbreak? Stuck in a moment in time. Have you ever gazed at the stars after bidding goodbye? After the heartbreak, footsteps echo loudly, reminiscent of when you used to wake me up. Your shadow envelops me and consumes the colors of my dreams. The empty space in my bed serves as a reminder that you are no longer here. Your voice replays in my mind like a love song, while the screams and lies tear me apart from within. I am left with a vacant sky. Have you ever seen the sun after heartbreak? Trapped in a moment in time. Have you ever observed the stars after saying goodbye? I am lost in darkness, longing to be where you are. It's incredibly challenging to hold myself together when you tore me apart. Haunted by your facade, vanished with the light. Days and nights seem endless. All my innocence has perished, has perished. Have you ever seen the sun? Have you ever seen the stars? I have seen them reflected in your eyes before. After the heartbreak, frozen in a moment in time. Have you ever seen the stars? I have seen them reflected in your eyes before. Haunted by your facade, vanished with the light. Days and nights seem endless. All my innocence has perished.

MarioMx64:

WOW I LIKE IT

Alanaaaaaaa:

Thank you

hellokitty265:

me liki

Beanie:

I love this, I understand it too. Although, maybe try to break it up some, into paragraphs or smaller sections.?

hellokitty265:

cool

2hrs:

rlly good

Lustforlana:

this is really good i like it , good job!

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