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LaPrincessaHermosa:

Story time!! (this 1 is very short I don't think I'll write more to it tho)

LaPrincessaHermosa:

The air was thick with the stench of sweat and alcohol as the night dragged on behind the dimly lit bar. Jake and Logan, two notorious criminals known for their brutal and twisted ways, sat at a secluded table in the corner. Their eyes scanned the room, searching for their next target. And then they saw her. Luna, a young woman with long black hair and a hauntingly beautiful face, was sitting alone at the bar. Her short black dress clung to her curves, eliciting lustful glances from the men around her. But Jake and Logan had other plans for her. As Luna sipped her drink, unaware of the danger lurking in the shadows, Jake and Logan made their move. They approached her with sinister smiles, their dark intentions hidden beneath smooth words and charming demeanor. "Care to join us for a drink, beautiful?" Jake asked, his voice dripping with malice. Luna hesitated for a moment, sensing the danger that emanated from the two men. But something drew her to them, a morbid curiosity mixed with a sense of foreboding that she couldn't shake. Against her better judgment, she agreed to join them. As the night wore on, the three of them drank and laughed, with Luna caught in a web of deceit and manipulation spun by Jake and Logan. They fed her drinks until she was dizzy and disoriented, her senses dulled by alcohol and the toxic atmosphere. And then, they led her to the back of the bar. In the dark alley behind the bar, Jake and Logan's true intentions were revealed. Luna's eyes widened in fear as she realized the trap she had unknowingly fallen into. The men's faces contorted with sadistic glee as they advanced on her, their hands reaching out to touch her in ways that made her skin crawl. Luna fought back with all the strength she had left, but she was no match for the two dangerous criminals. They pinned her to the cold concrete ground, their leering faces close to hers as they taunted and mocked her. The horror of the situation sank in, and Luna screamed for help, her voice echoing off the walls of the alley in a desperate plea for salvation. But no one came. In the end, Jake and Logan had their way with Luna, leaving her broken and violated in the darkness of the alley. As they walked away, their twisted laughter echoing in the night, a sense of dread settled over the scene. The beauty of Luna had been tarnished, her innocence shattered by the cruelty of those who knew no bounds.

Manny300303199:

Dam that's great 😃👍

LaPrincessaHermosa:

@manny300303199 wrote:
Dam that's great 😃👍
tysm

Manny300303199:

@laprincessahermosa wrote:
@manny300303199 wrote:
Dam that's great 😃👍
tysm
Np mate

hellokitty265:

nice

LaPrincessaHermosa:

@hellokitty265 wrote:
nice
thx

Luigi0210:

That's a bit.. dark.

NaiNoah:

very...dark...

LaPrincessaHermosa:

Lmao It's a horror story :> it's supposed 2 be dark lmao

L8RVAL:

Scawy :P

L8RAaronOnTop:

It's a good dark story but it should be more dark.

jessistocutelol:

lowk scary lol

boredperson955:

🤫🧏

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