Question

my poem :I come into the peace of wild things

who do not tax their lives with forethought

of grief. I come into the presence of still water.

And I feel above me the day-blind stars

waiting with their light. For a time

I rest in the grace of the world, and am free.

Answer 1

Pretty good

Answer 2

ty

Answer 3

yw

Answer 4

yhh pretty decent :3

Answer 5

tyyyyyyyyy

Answer 6

I like it! You should come up with a name for your poem instead of "My poem". It'd give us another way to view it from just reading the name. One the other hand that's beautiful.

Answer 7

A good heading or "title" for this would be "The World" because it really ties so well into the way the world is now. -

Answer 8

Nice

Answer 9

W Poem

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Ts

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