Was up y'all working on another song hope yall like it not finished but almost , i dont or even know if my voice is good for singing but hope y'all like the lyrics

Song is called is Called Shadows

I've walked through shadows of my own design,
Lost in darkness, couldn't see the signs.
But now I'm standing here, broken and true,
Begging for forgiveness, reaching out to you.

Give me a chance to make things right,
To mend the pieces of our shattered night.
I'll rewrite the story, erase the pain,
Together we'll dance in the healing rain.

I've stumbled, I've fallen, I've let you down,
But in your eyes, redemption's found.
With every heartbeat, I feel the change,
A second chance, a love to rearrange.

Let's cast away the shadows of the past,
Embrace the future, make our love last.
Hand in hand, we'll walk this road anew,
With every step, my love for you grew.

Give me a chance to make things right,
To mend the pieces of our shattered night.
I'll rewrite the story, erase the pain,
Together we'll dance in the healing rain.

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Was up y'all working on another song hope yall like it not finished but almost , i dont or even know if my voice is good for singing but hope y'all like the lyrics

Song is called is Called Shadows

I've walked through shadows of my own design,
Lost in darkness, couldn't see the signs.
But now I'm standing here, broken and true,
Begging for forgiveness, reaching out to you.

Give me a chance to make things right,
To mend the pieces of our shattered night.
I'll rewrite the story, erase the pain,
Together we'll dance in the healing rain.

I've stumbled, I've fallen, I've let you down,
But in your eyes, redemption's found.
With every heartbeat, I feel the change,
A second chance, a love to rearrange.

Let's cast away the shadows of the past,
Embrace the future, make our love last.
Hand in hand, we'll walk this road anew,
With every step, my love for you grew.

Give me a chance to make things right,
To mend the pieces of our shattered night.
I'll rewrite the story, erase the pain,
Together we'll dance in the healing rain.

Nightmoon · Answer

Nice job! fr

hellokitty265 · Answer

cool

hannahj · Answer

i dont like it

YoungBlood · Answer

it looks like ur name is Alexis

Nightmoon · Answer

@hannahj wrote:

i dont like it

Please give reasons why you don't - saying that plainly is rude - so give suggestions on what would be needed to improve it for your liking.

Alexisback · Answer

@nightmoon wrote:

Nice job! fr

thx

Alexisback · Answer

@hellokitty265 wrote:

cool

right

Alexisback · Answer

@hannahj wrote:

i dont like it

its not for everyone

Alexisback · Answer

@youngblood wrote:

it looks like ur name is Alexis

lmao good one

Alexisback · Answer

@nightmoon wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

i dont like it

Please give reasons why you don't - saying that plainly is rude - so give suggestions on what would be needed to improve it for your liking.

thx bro

Lilly2010 · Answer

Goodjob! keep up the amazing song writing, you can go far in life with talent like that!!

Alexisback · Answer

@lilly2010 wrote:

Goodjob! keep up the amazing song writing, you can go far in life with talent like that!!

aww thx you

Lilly2010 · Answer

@alexisback wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

Goodjob! keep up the amazing song writing, you can go far in life with talent like that!!

aww thx you

nppp

Nightmoon · Answer

@alexisback wrote:

@nightmoon wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

i dont like it

Please give reasons why you don't - saying that plainly is rude - so give suggestions on what would be needed to improve it for your liking.

thx bro

Yw - being disrespectful out of spite isnt tolerated.

L8RVAL · Answer

W

hannahj · Answer

@nightmoon wrote:

@alexisback wrote:

@nightmoon wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

i dont like it

Please give reasons why you don't - saying that plainly is rude - so give suggestions on what would be needed to improve it for your liking.

thx bro

Yw - being disrespectful out of spite isnt tolerated.

i like itt!!

Alexisback · Answer

@l8rval wrote:

W

thx

Alexisback · Answer

@hannahj wrote:

@nightmoon wrote:

@alexisback wrote:

@nightmoon wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

i dont like it

Please give reasons why you don't - saying that plainly is rude - so give suggestions on what would be needed to improve it for your liking.

thx bro

Yw - being disrespectful out of spite isnt tolerated.

i like itt!!

lol thx u

L8RVAL · Answer

Nice

hannahj · Answer

@alexisback wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

@nightmoon wrote:

@alexisback wrote:

@nightmoon wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

i dont like it

Please give reasons why you don't - saying that plainly is rude - so give suggestions on what would be needed to improve it for your liking.

thx bro

Yw - being disrespectful out of spite isnt tolerated.

i like itt!!

lol thx u

yww

jessistocutelol · Answer

Love it, as a singer this song goes very well in certain voices. Singing it, u can feel the beat and understand the feeling and emotion of the song.

L8RVAL · Answer

@jessistocutelol wrote:

Love it, as a singer this song goes very well in certain voices. Singing it, u can feel the beat and understand the feeling and emotion of the song.

Fr

L8RAaronOnTop · Answer

@l8rval wrote:

@jessistocutelol wrote:

Love it, as a singer this song goes very well in certain voices. Singing it, u can feel the beat and understand the feeling and emotion of the song.

Fr

W

Alexisback · Answer

@jessistocutelol wrote:

Love it, as a singer this song goes very well in certain voices. Singing it, u can feel the beat and understand the feeling and emotion of the song.

Wow , thx you very much

jessistocutelol · Answer

@alexisback wrote:

@jessistocutelol wrote:

Love it, as a singer this song goes very well in certain voices. Singing it, u can feel the beat and understand the feeling and emotion of the song.

Wow , thx you very much

Yh np!

totallynotcrumb · Answer

Bluh

hellokitty265 · Answer

w

Alexisback · Answer

@hellokitty265 wrote:

w

Thx