Question

A poem I wrote-

Answer 1

In shadows cast by whispered lies,
A tale unfolds beneath veiled skies.
A guy, with charm, did weave his art,
Yet behind his words, hid a deceitful heart.

With honeyed phrases, he drew me near,
His words like music, sweet to hear.
But little did I know, behind his smile,
Lurked a darkness, hidden all the while.

He spoke of dreams and whispered schemes,
His eyes alight with false moonbeams.
Yet in the corners of his crafted tale,
Lay the truth, shrouded, frail.

For in the shadows of his gaze,
Lay the secrets of his errant ways.
A girlfriend, unseen, yet ever there,
A silent witness to his affair.

Innocence lost in a web of lies,
As I stumbled upon his love's disguise.
He played a game of hearts, unfair,
Leaving broken souls in his careless snare.

Answer 2

This sounds/seems like some famous artist or poem writer made this- good freaking job!

Answer 3

cool

Answer 4

i love it. its so cute

Answer 5

over here hating on a poem i wrote ab a boy who hurt me cmon now😭

Answer 6

just leave her alone dude

Answer 7

Great poem, I wish I had even half you skill

Answer 8

your*

Answer 9

Cute

Answer 10

this is gooooood

Answer 11

nice

Answer 12

this is goood

Answer 13

Ts

Answer 14

-verrryyy niceeee-

Answer 15

Nicee

Answer 16

omg i love it can you give me some advice for my poems

Answer 17

ouu cool